Puedes seguir la historia ,esta enteresante, tienes buenos personajes y hay que corregir los errores que tienes.
Por favor

Fucking retarded

This story has a really good plot, and I loved the ending. However, there are so many grammatical errors and rushed plot lines that the story was really hard to read.

Can u do a sequel please?!

One of the worst stories I've ever read

I'd like a sequel :) nice story, kudos! :) Thank you!

I would love a sequel

a follow up has to happen

im sorry to say this but u must agree with the others... one of the worst writtrn fics there are... you had a great plot you know but it was done hastily and grammatically bad... plus it seems no consistency with what team is playing against Bulgaria... it could have been a world cup match or euro cup match for puddlemore but it would never be a national team vs a club team...

Por favor actualiza tu historia y has una secuela de dapnne con su embarazo, tienes una gran inspiración en la historia.

Wait, how can someone who has been rejected for 10 years or so forgives and forgets his parents that easily? I don't know if that is normal but that is a bit strange, don't you think?

Wait a second, I believe there is one problem in your story.
You wrote that Harry caught the snitch (150pts) and the final score for the englishmen is 170, which means two goals by the English chasers (20pts), against 16 goals from the bulgarians (160pts). However, you made John say that the English chasers were better than the bulgarian chasers, but the opposite is the truth.
Could you please correct this part (near the end of the chapter)?

In my opinion, a sequel could be really great, to see how everybody will react to Daphne's pregnancy.

Do a Sequel please mate as it was very good and an enjoyable story

Please do the sequel!

Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next