I hope you write more of this.

That fedora worry's me

It seems like this chapter got a little bit out of place. The text commands such as:
"p class"MsoNormal" are in the writing and was hoping that you'd come to notice it as it's happened to me before. In any case I'm loving these previous chapters.

very interesting

Well, this is certainly an interesting start. I like the idea of Transdimensionalisim, I though I don't know how far this will impact the story, but I am intrigued and will keep an eye on the story. Please check your writing though. There have been multiple times where a sentence didn’t make any sense and it was hard to understand what you wanted to convey. I do not know if english is a secondary language for you or not, but consider letting somebody else read the chapter first or reread it yourself.

All in all, a good first chapter. Keep it up. I will watch your fic with great interest.

I honestly thought this was pretty good and wish to read more of it

hella good, please continue this story