great story,

I hope will continue it.

Melissa

I am anxiously waiting for an update. I want to know where Grissom was going and what is going to happen next between Jera and Grissom.

FANTASTIC! Keep up the FABULOUS work and post SOON!

really enthralled here. why do all the really good authors love ta leave us hangig?

Oh man poor Grissom, can not wait for the next part to see how he handles this latest event. I can not wait to see how it can get fixed.

This is very very well written, The writer has a clear understanding of the characters.I look forward to the next chapter. Keep at it!

i like this. is original. please up date soon

wow! great story! hope you post the next chapter soon. this is the best story so far this year. i griss and jera will fall in love and the rest is history.

Cool ending. Whats going to happen next. Is Nick going to be too friendly? How will Grissom react?

Love the story so far.

This is great so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope Nick can keep his paws off.

Your writing is well done. I'm interested in the story and I'm not usually a big fan of original characters that are CSIs. I'll keep reading if you keep writing.

Interesting start.