Thought I’d point this out, you misspelled ‘rogue’ as ‘rouge’ in your description. The former refers to a renegade, the other is red in French among other things.

hey, not to be a dickhesd, but about 1/4 of this chapter was just the 1st author's notr, could you try to squeeze down on that? it'd make the reading experience moreenjoyable, and you could still put all of that at the bottom,

Nah, the rating's gine. As is this story! It's awesome! Can't wait for more!

Man, I love it when player actions are considered canon, like the Lore entry for Abide the Return. Guardians are crazy and don't care.
I wonder how everyone would feel once they learn the Crucible combat training was live fire, to the death...

another great chapter

And this is where I stop reading

"I'm a Hunter. I'm not from this world...”

So she just, says that? Like what the heck, you just don’t tell that to people you practically just met. Just, why?

Sorry, but god, stuff like that makes me cringe

This blatant disrespect of linguistic accuracy is infuriating.

Um, you misspelled 'Rogue'.

LOVING THIS

I like the story so far but I feel like the story would be better if it was written in 3rd person.

Will the last city or the vanguard find a way to remnant?

Vol 7, or Vol 1, STRQ, not too much.

There’s not a lot of fanfiction with post volume 3 that would be intresting to see.

Gimme a sec flipping a coin Heads Pre-Vol 1 Tails Vol 3

Ok flipped my coin “it was heads” siri’s exact words ok also thanks for the chapter :3

I hope you’re kidding about the baby thing..*shivers*

As far as the tine line goes, I think it should be post vol.3, I’m sticking to my guns, the going to beacon shtick is overdone