Reviews for Naruto's Hazbin Hotel Adventures
x590 chapter 4 . 7/26
i like the story and as much as im sorta over harems i kinda like the main options you chose. I feel anymore and it would be a little much, something i never see in fics like this is naruto finally getting to see his ancestors or parents and getting to be a family but thats just me never really understood the fascination with pairing him with his mother. Its a great story so far.
PersonaNinja Lux chapter 4 . 7/25
I am sure your Aware of the new Hazbin Hotel music video about Angel Dust and Cherri called Addict right?
does that mean were getting a new chapter soon?
Imperious115 chapter 4 . 7/23
Will you put millie or loona into it?
Bigomajinn chapter 4 . 7/20
Plzzzz update
Elven21 chapter 2 . 7/17
Hope you update. This is great
avjuan37 chapter 4 . 7/13
please make more chapters
HMV Black Templar chapter 4 . 7/11
So, if it is gonna be a harem fic, and this story is a crossover with Helluva Boss as well as Hazbin Hotel, any chance Loona could make it in? Great story so far!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/21
Please, please, please, don't be a stupid son of a bitch like every other Naruto author. They all make the same fucking mistakes. Too many whores. A true harem should only have at least four women in it. Anything more then that just clutters the whole thing up and then the story dies like an abandoned infant.
Noire Black chapter 4 . 6/21
What about Loona from Helluva Boss? I think she would make a good addition to the harem and it would be a good way to bridge all three shows together.
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 4 . 6/21
great story so far.
Enrq Rldn chapter 4 . 6/6
me gustia que agregues a lilith al harem
StarLight162 chapter 4 . 5/29
Gotta say I'm absolutely loving this so far, and I'd love to see kushina, mito, and loona in the harem. Also you could always do some naruto/anko fillers! Anyway keep up the amazing work luv I can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/9
Hmm wonder how Helluva Boss tie she into this version what with them being able to go to the Land of the Living and take care of unfinished business will they be ANBU of hell or something staying undetected as they do so?
Alphasdragon chapter 4 . 5/1
It is good to see you back, I would like you to add loona, it may be somewhat rustic on the outside but it has a good side inside only for those who care, as for the lack of chapters you could focus on some interactions before the canon and Encounters with other characters even make the extermination that just happened not happened before the pilot but a year earlier, although I do not think you should delay too much the meeting of Naruto, Charlie and Vaggie after all relationships take time to form and is good to start also naruto and anko can help charlie to build the hotel
UnsanMusho chapter 4 . 4/30
Ooooooooh so that was Mito not Kushina ok then, that makes things even more interesting. Anyways I can understand your trouble in creating chapters since the series hasn't gone off the ground since the initial animation (which I'm still hoping it does since the series has so much potential) so why not just do some filler type chapters showcasing Naruto and Anko getting use to life in hell? You can have some other demons (either unnamed mooks or big players from different mythologies) cause trouble and have Naruto, Anko and maybe other ninjas (since I can imagine alot of them being in hell) under Mito do mercenary work before meeting up with Charlie. Speaking of Charlie, I was really surprised with the whole "parents being serperated" part since this gives alot more room for both to work with.

As for the harem, what you have right now with Naruto/Anko/Charlie/Vaggie is pretty solid and I would like Kushina to be part of it. Other than that I can't really say, I mean I would like to see characters like Tenten, Ino or even Haku be with Naruto but if I read the first chapter correctly then I can presume that Naruto didn't have any friends besides Anko right? If that's the case then your original harem plus Kushina should be good enough UNLESS you can come up with a way for any Naruto-verse girl who goes to hell to get close to Naruto without it looking like a cope-out. Anyways this fic is still very intriguing and I look forward to seeing what you can come up with. If you need some opinions or ideas to discuss with, leave me a PM.
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