Really liking how it’s going so far, I’d like to read more.

Update please!

Cool first chapter! I really love how kickass Ryanne is; very refreshing and a joy to read :) Also like, Canadian representation, oh hell yeah XD Did you attend the Royal Agriculture Winter Fair this year? I didn’t go myself, but I was passing through the expo grounds on one of the fair days and saw all the horse trailers and stuff. It sounds like an interesting event, even if there were no firefights ;) Another question: how do you pronounce Ryanne? Is it pronounced the same as Ryan(quick), or punctuated more like Rye-Anne (emphasis on the second syllable as well)? Or something else?
Anyways, I’m excited to find out what happens next! Thanks for posting and keep up the good work! Until next time, all the best and happy holidays . xoxo

That was a great start. Love the suspense.