Cool

Ilya!

I read YA and i know the sound effect is supposed to have but my brain interpreted it immediately in Young Adult lol

What an amazing finale for Volume 1! I loved that the rest of Team RWBY (as well as JNPR and Alix (and Cinder)) had a chance to participate. Can't wait to see what you have in store for Volume 2!

I like your additions to this part and the cameos of future characters.

Yikes! This really is more serious than in canon! I love how you are combining the plots of 'The Badge and the Burden' and 'Jaunedice'/'Forever Fall'. Please keep doing a good job!

I agree that even untrained civilians should have a vague idea of what Aura is. Jaune not knowing seems like it was for the audience's benefit.

I’d just suggest light foreshadowing, try not to make it obvious. But um good luck

Aside from my note below, these look pretty good. Please continue.

Will Pyrrha still die in V3?

As you said, nothing substantial changed about the Red and White Trailers.

I am looking forward to what have planned for the Black trailer.

I would also like to wish you the best of luck in you endeavours on this project. Rewrites are a controversial topic - to say the least - within any fandom and it takes a great amount of courage to follow through with one. These tend to scrutinized much more harshly than other fics, so I hope you don't let it get to you.

I will be following your progress and I look forward to future updates.

Good Luck and Happy Writing!