Curious to see what you have in mind and hoping for great battles.

Nice introspection and beginning

J'ai hâte de lire la suite ! J'aime vos histoires !
Bon courage et merci !

Hey, I’m so glad you picked up this series again and have decided to take it even farther. Years ago I thought your writing was so well written (and it still is), I can see just from the not-so-small chapters you have posted that your writing will be even better now. I’m excited for the chapters to come and I’m sure everyone else is too. But take your time and enjoy your writing please. Have a very happy belated New Years ️

I'm so happy I finally had to chance to read this. I loved the original story and where you were going with it and so I can only imagine this revamp will only make me love it more!

hey there i liked your original story and so far this is good to just thought to say
also i would prefer if it was every couple of weeks that you posted

I like that you are giving this story another try even if it is like you said, "a completely new story." So far so good in my eyes. I want Luffy to win her bet with Marco and Ace. She has to so she can prove those boys wrong. I like how she still believes Sabo is alive even if no one else does. Oh and I think you should edit and post one chapter as you go. I figure it would be less stressful than having to do it all in one swoop. Just pick which would be easier for you in the end.

Great story

Well now, it's been several years since I read the original version, but this looks just as promising as the Original.