Pretty cringe ngl

Interesting idea. God bless you.

Oh oh ! I like where this is going !

Ok...this is...something.

I don't know why you felt the need to call this story "The White Wildcard", kinda seems like your trying to reach the wrong crowd there.

You kinda went abundant with the angst and the swearing for my particular tastes. Not saying you should change it because of what I think, just that it maybe a bit too much.

Also, why are you promoting your religious views in the story. I feel that that is going to attract a lot of naysayers and people who may harass you for it (plus it's kinda a bit dumb to do that on a website that had a lot of gay ships. I ship gay shps, 3/4's of the stories on this site are gay.) I'm not saying you shouldn't have relgion in your stories, just that you should consider what the effects of that is and what message your conveying, whatever your intentions are.