Hi amazing chapter I like how you put the part of AOD of the Louvre in it makes it so nice to hear Lara's point of view of how she felt that night. I must say I'm really loving the story so far.

Wow interesting chapter, I like how Kurtis is worrying and then he made the a choice to trust his wife and wait for the morning. The finding that Lara found it interesting as well.
Oh I don't like what Christian did, somethings off about him and Kurtis sensed it.
Well the adventure is going to start soon if I read the end right, good work ;P

This is another amazing chapter. I'll how Kurtis just want to know more of this Christian guy and I like how Lara and Christian had worked together with Werner, nice job and the idea that Werner and he turned their back on her that was good. The last part where he finally opens up about his wife and what he wants from Lara, great work there.
Waiting for next update

I like this chapter wasn't excepting that, nice. The whole scene was well written.

WOW
I love the usual day they had and the night out sounded amazing but the last part where Lara is Surprised to see Christian please update update!

Hi there! :D So, the first chapter was very nicely written. No surprise here. ;) I wonder what your plan with this story is... The title makes me worried to be honest! :O Concerning the second chapter, I've really enjoyed our dear duo's casual day. And how sweet and peaceful it was! :) The (LaraxKurtisxWinston) interaction was greatly written IMO. :) I'm looking forward to another update! :)

Hi
I like the idea of this story. Chapter one was interesting with the voice and the warnings and how Christian must now make a plan. Secondly this chapter is nice I like the idea that Lara is following her mentor's footsteps and that she and Kurtis is married and that they spoiled Winston and his wife and the last part that Christian came to see her that time of night.
Waiting for chapter 3.

Wow
The beginning was great, I like the way you wrote the warning and the voice that also warns them. I didn't see that one coming when that thing took Marie and tells Christian what he must do to save her. Nice.
The ending is also a mystery I wonder who he will call for help.
Glad to see you back again

Hi
This sound very interesting. The whole scene is so greatly described and what happens oh wow. Wonder Who Christian is talking about. hope its our fav Lara