Reviews for Harry Potter's new headmaster
fraewyn chapter 14 . 9/25
Love it!
Kminari chapter 3 . 8/14
... I really like the story, the background and the events that are happening (the plot), but I don't like how it is written, Its very difficult to inmerse in the story when there are various " missing denoting the end or beginning of a dialog, the POV doesn't look like POV, its always like a 3 person POV (a narrator almost omniscient) and not from who they are supposed to be.
geekymom chapter 14 . 8/12
Terrific chapter!
Hugo Cesar Ortiz chapter 13 . 8/4
Continúaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ImaginativeFury chapter 1 . 8/3
This was a crap chapter.

Every is told like reading from an encyclopedia instead of actually telling a story that makes sense.
ChrisW96003 chapter 13 . 7/26
I got an update for Chapter 14 Fri, Jul 17 at 7:37 AM
and it still hasn't posted what's up?
Guest chapter 13 . 7/17
I think Dumbledore is full of it.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/17
I still find Dumbledore to be highly suspicious... do the Goblins of Alterans have a Chair of Truth... Since Truth Serum wouldn't work with his Mind shields?
geekymom chapter 13 . 7/18
Fantastic chapter!
sam chapter 12 . 7/11
thank you ;)
i really like your story, :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5
You have no writing skills
Romily chapter 2 . 5/29
Ok, not the story for me. It just doesn’t keep me captivated.
Romily chapter 1 . 5/29
Pity - it’s first person. I am intrigued, but not sure i can keep going, i am really not a fan of first person fanfics. I‘ll give it an honest try
Edocsiru chapter 1 . 5/7
English motherfucker, Do You Speak It?
Guest chapter 11 . 4/26
Terrible
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