| Reviews for The Unintentional Seduction of Chiba Mamoru |
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Nopenname22 chapter 5 . 9/22 Rereading this story an love this chapter so much! So much of it has played in my mind since the first live read I did, when I was eagerly awaiting every chapter to come out! Hahahaha the 'walnut of a man' forever perfect. And that grocery store kiss? Made up of everything pure in the world omg. Anyways yes thanks again babe! |
lunatheblackcat chapter 13 . 9/16 Mwah, looooooove this story so much. I feel so bad that I couldn’t put my appreciation in better words. But thank you thank you thank you Flora! |
Danni-Bunny chapter 13 . 9/7 Never complimented you via this platform but I just wanted to let you know that this story is one of my favorite ones in the whole fandom. Thank you so much for writing this masterpiece |
seireidoragon chapter 13 . 8/20 This was a very well written story and it was super fun to read! |
Jwalla1986 chapter 3 . 8/16 I have to say that every single male needs to read this chapter before they are ever allowed to touch a woman! You were able to summarize the plight of women that has perpetuated throughout the ages. Especially here in the bible belt of the US. Women are so over sexualized without having the sexual freedom to express themselves. We are taught that we are only defined sexually by a man. Thank you for your honest and frank discussion about female sexuality! We need more sex positive stories by women for women! |
dccheung08 chapter 13 . 8/15 Still loving this story so much no matter how many times I have read it |
Zophanie chapter 13 . 8/8 I would so love to see more. You are so freaking AMAZING. |
chastityjk chapter 13 . 7/28 I loved this. I don't think I've laughed so hard and smiled so much reading a fanfic in my life. It was great! |
wishwars chapter 8 . 7/26 Yaaaaaasssss conversations! I hope he tells her soon and that she’s not mad.. but damn that was a sexy chapter! |
wishwars chapter 7 . 7/26 Oh Mamoru - he is really holding himself up to some crazy standards here! I know he doesn’t want Usagi to know it’s his first time, but he’s allowed to not be a sex god! Usagi will sort this out soon I’m sure. Amazing descriptions of him pleasuring her though! |
shelynite chapter 13 . 7/21 AAAAAAAAAA I was literally SQUEEING AND KICKING MY FEET at the reveal! I LOVE unknowningly-mutual pining with secret identities and I was DYING to know which of them would de-transform first. I binged this all in one go, so on top of I LOVED THIS, thanks for helping me stay up and reset my sleep schedule! But, oh god, what happens with the Princess/Endymion reveal in this verse? Hhhhhhhhh (Also hi, I'm on the internet again! I missed you!) |
wishwars chapter 6 . 7/2 Daaaaamn but you write everything about sex so vivid and visceral and HOT! When he has to work so hard not to come in his pants? And you just write how they feel so well! I love that she showed up to his place so early, like what?! USAGI?! And then the fact that when she’s gone he writes notes about what she reacted to best?! I kind of hope she never finds those lol but dear sweet Jesus when she left her underwear at his place?! LOL he’s dead. Part of his identity certainly is if he’s missing class for this hehehe LOVE IT! Ugh and their just adorably sweet interactions when they aren’t making out?! The subway and umbrella stuff was TOO CUTE! And the way that Usagi is getting wrecked from this too - more than she was expecting lol whoops! And it effecting her productivity too - “every quest idea she wrote up these days was way too sexually charged anyway.” XD And i ALWAYS adore a Mamoru obsessed with Usagi’s hair! |
wishwars chapter 5 . 6/28 I was too long away from this story D: damn, Mamoru’s agonizing is just so good XD this: his prude bones“ - I laughed out loud! And the fact that he thinks they both had their first kiss on the same day but in separate locations lol Also, “this walnut of a man” is a fab insult. And the irony of him being the man treating her that way without realizing it? SO GOOD! And then “Good to know” - GOOD TO KNOW?! Mamoru you fucking idiot XD he talks a big game in his head and then can’t follow through - precious angel! And then they way they’re both embarrassed in the store?! Adorable! And poor Usagi: “They didn't fit. They never had. They were like - they were day and night. Smug brilliance and bubbly naivete.” Oh sweetie, if only you knew... but then we wouldn’t get all the embarrassing angst! But then he kissed her! Our brave boy :) and Usagi being brave (and sneaky) in her own way: “If he was adamant to only touch her over her clothes, she'd give him less to work with.“ XD |
Lyra Terra chapter 13 . 6/9 Finally finished it! And I love it- every word. I'm also a pretty big proponent of a healthy education about sex and sexuality, so this was a fantastic read. I hope to hear more from you in the future :) (And really, I haven't read smut in YEARS, but damn was this good.) |
Lyra Terra chapter 6 . 6/9 You know, I'm not normally a smut reader. But. Dear. God. Excuse me while I add to favorites. |