So hey I’ve got a question would Jaune’s semblances work on Ur and revive her or not?

This rocks.

How much stronger will Jaune become?

Excellent update thank you

I think it's a good idea for Virgo to join the harem.

Dude two ideas for jaune armor how about one armor for stealth say an assasin creed style involving the shadows to remember ren and for strength Reinhardt armor with his hammer as reverence to nora, a hunter outfit for air and remembering blake and a reaper outfit for ruby and for a new outfit for jaune for the first time skip there was one where he and blake were ninjas and he a 3d manoeuvring gear on his hip

yo! i love your story so far! despite the grammar issues i find, its really great! and it has a lot of potential as well! and as for you asking us reading your fic if you should add Virgo, i say go for it! it would be interesting to see more ships like that! especially in a harem! keep up the good work!

I'm perfectly ok with you adding Virgo to Jaune's harem.
I have a weapon idea for Jaune how about a gun blade like in final fantasy 14. Look up the class Gunbreaker, they gather and store aether(the energy that fuels magic in the game) in bullets that they insert into the weapons bullet chamber and when the weapon's blade is about to make contact with whatever they're attacking they pull the trigger and release a magic explosion while slicing their opponent.
I hope you take my idea into consideration.
Stay safe and Keep Being Awesome

oohh boy can't wait for jaunes reaction to ice shell

Excellent update

Well i do think you may be going a little fast. This S class mission didnt happen so soon.

It is good you had jaune mention some of his concern with natsu and fairy tail.

Now for laxius. I made mention bc unlike cardin, laxius has reasons good ones for his future actions. Being in a guild brings enemies other guilds and dark guilds will target you. Than we have what happened between him and his grandfather. Markov tossed aside younger laxius feelings. To me i feel like jaune would try to help him overcome this self he is in.

Here comes demon island!

Will any Grimm appear?

Hmm for everything why don't you have him requip items close to his team and team RWBY's weapons. That way he can always feel his friends are with him in this new life. Can't be perfect replica's, but I am sure he can get items that are basically the same things.

This story is great, please continue!

I will say, you should always do a spell check before submitting your work. This would help out be more readable.

Thanks for the chapter