What? The last chapter was a huge cliffhanger and this has absolutely nothing to do with anything? Like seriously, what?

I'm a little late, but I got three whole chapters! Such a good story, just when I think everything was going to wind down it suddenly picks up! I honestly dind't think we would get Alphonse back so soon, or to have him look like Edward. It's so strange to think of Alphonse and imagine twins now. I just love to see them unwinding themselves slowly, God knows they need it.

I wonder if Ivan's (the dog) history will resurface and eventually merge with the rest of the story or what the Drachmans truly want with Fiona's research. On another note, Louis message was quite ominous, and him bonding with Winry over automail was great! Thanks for the chapters and keep up the good work!

Wow! another two good chapters! It's a little sad to know how the two of them adapt (or would, in Alphonse's case) so easily to regular life if they could. I really feel for them. Never thought there would be a day in which Edward would willingly cut his hair, it was a surprising little thing.
On the other hand, Fiona's secret (implied in earlier chapters) it's starting to unravel and it's great!

Overall thanks for this story and keep up the good work

Hey again, thanks for another two chapters! Things are slowly starting to pick up and sooner rather than later things will slowly fall into place. It's great to see Alphonse again and I was so not expecting him to have his cover blown up! (and in front of dangerous/ lots of people too). It strangely reminded me of Alphonse own adventure in Dublith in Greed's lair.

Overall I'm quite happy with the direction this story is taking, seems pretty interesting and it's really a shame there aren't many reviews. You have an amazing little story here, just hope you see it too!

I Love it! Keep up the good work!

This is a pretty good story! love the little interactions between all the characters, the lenghtiness of each chapter and the pace it's going. I haven't seen many stories having Edward taking an apprenticeship under someone else not present in the main cast.

I'd love to see how things looks like from Al's perspective (and all the little things he tries to do to entertaint himself and evade discovery) too. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!