Awesome update. Love how everything is going. Looking forward to reading more.

Mooooooooooreeeeeeee

Awesome update. Looking forward to reading more. Love idea for sacred gear.

l like your writing style it is very obvious you are taking this writing is good quality and dont mind the rias haters generally they are the ones who didn't read light novels ,just watched the anime

can you make your mc any less cringy?

i feel like Jax will be the type of dude to keep making jokes as he’s getting beaten up.

will he ever shut up? you call him a warrior but he acts nothing like one. warriors aren’t supposed to be loud mouths who don’t do anything but talk alejen when they are getting killed *Raynare*.

To me feels like the dudes just being manipulated by Rias (like he’s a circus monkey) the entire time through this chapter & yet again dude dies by a fallen angel in Rias’ territory after she’s given him a flyer.

Never liked this plot on how the MC/OC dies by a fallen angel to then be resurrected by Rias by a flyer she gave hours before, just feels so shady and the MC just goes along with it. I mean if she wanted him to join the club why not just ask they are meant to be friends right?..the flyer thing just makes it soooo shifty it immediately makes me dislike Rias.

The thing I really did like was the interaction between Jaxson & Rias when they first met, it was new but by the end of their next meeting on their first school day he’s already dead and she’s gained a new pawn and she doesn’t even seem upset that he died.

I’ll give the next few chapters a read I guess this story could redeem itself for me but currently I feel the MC should be question things at least in his head about this whole situation.

In this chapter,

The Rias Gremory heiress, Who believes she is in control, of everything,
rears her disgusting head, partially.

It seemed more, like she was ordering him, to the club "house" instead of strongly suggesting for it.

Let me guess, In the next chapter, which will have the possible conversation,

She will vehemently order/demand, for jax to steer clear of Asia Argento, yes?

That is the part of her i despise, the elitist Rias, that believes, whatever she says, is absolute,
and non-under-worlder's are enemy's throughout.

More like, if its not underworld, then its "MY" enemy,
and so, their your enemies too, because you belong to "me".. (The elitist Rias mentality)

Awesome update. Love everything about it.

Once again another great chapter. We also got our first glimpse of his powers or rather his sacred gear if it can be called that. I was very sure that he would have some relation with Fenrir because Rias constantly calls him her little wolf and even he calls himself wolf. Well it was a nice guess from me.

I also very much like the interaction between him and Rias. They actually feel much more realistic while still flirty. Nice writing. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Have a great time and hope to see you soon.
-Silver

Can he please be like a Nordic berserker with Kratos from God Of War I would love that so much. But anywho this was a good read even though it was just the first chapter or whatever the fuck you want to call it can’t wait until the next update.

I'm going to be honest, I dropped when I saw the protagonist was STILL reincarnated in the same way as Issei!
admittedly, it is "slightly" different from the anime, but it isn't very difficult to imagine Raynare strike Issei at a different time of day for this or that reason!
Couldn't the Mc stay human for change?

why choose Rias again? for convenience? Rias alpha female of Mc harem?
is it really so difficult to diverge from Issei's harem? sigh

I suppose, this is some sort of, rias sympathy story?

This protagonist is going to get practically ALL the female's within his age group, peerage's included,

With Rias Gremory, and her queen, acting as the alpha female's in this, "relationship" ?

I can't stop it obviously, but her character could've been developed more from her
existing self, in the now.

Her generalized background tells of a different personality, then the one EVERY-one "knows" about,
realistically speaking.

Carry on or whatever, just wanted to speak my mind on this, good luck.

lo mismo no, Rias sabia que lo estaban espiando lo dejo matar y el protagonista ni siquiera lo sabrá

Very interesting, please keep going with the story! Do you have any kind of conogram for updates? Like one chapter a week?

Awesome story