Reviews for The Heart Of Darkness |
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luluQlulu chapter 1 . 4/16 That was GREAT! Nina and I both really enjoyed it. "I ATE BETH!" ~ Keep up the good work :) |
sarathechimera chapter 1 . 11/27/2019 This reminds me of the groundskeeper’s journal in REmake. I like the visual impact of capital and lower case letters when you’re conveying the “voice” It’s visually jarring! I also liked the moment where Hannah thought she’d written more than she did. Good job! I hope that you’ll continue to work on it when you’re feeling better! |