Reviews for The Real Phantom Menace
EmlynMara chapter 19 . 7/28
Delightful epilogue. At least Sheev finally found his true calling. And Vader’s world will never be the same. I trust Snips found her own happiness too. Thanks for sharing.
creativo chapter 19 . 7/27
How is Trey going to name his baby girl? because Rey is a fake name of someone who do not know her real one
holyscythe chapter 19 . 7/27
aww,im sad that this is the end of this story i would love to have read even more of this story.
this last chapter was fun to read but it felt a bit short and the time scip is a bit big.
i am happy for the happy ending but it would have been nice to have more chapters.
from a loyal fan.
have a nice day and stay safe.
:D
Lord Destroyer chapter 19 . 7/27
Well, if Brilani Silk, one of your OC found the prospect of being Vader’s daughter in law disdainful, I do wonder how she reacted to being related to the former emperor. Sounds like she doesn’t care for being a direct relation by marrying the son either men, or indirect relation by having her sister marry the son of either men.

Ha, Vader getting chewed out by Artoo for so long, he actually fell asleep during the droid’s rant. Well, at least he’s being patient and nice with the Wookies. Oh dear, it seems you can’t take your eyes off of any Skywalker kids.

Ugh, what was Lucas thinking when he came up the Gungans? Han is right about them making Yoda seemingly smarter.
Morriganna chapter 19 . 7/27
Very nice story and looking forward to more Star Wars from you soon!
Brievel chapter 19 . 7/27
I enjoyed this way, way too much. I cannot stop grinning like a mad thing.
IDidn'tSignUp4This chapter 19 . 7/27
Vader's inner monologue including "Bald is beautiful" made my day. Thanks!
Anon chapter 18 . 6/28
I love your SW fics! Will Vader meet up with C3PO and R2D2? I'd love to see Han's reaction that Vader built C3PO.
Lord Destroyer chapter 18 . 6/23
Luke belongs to Mara, and no one else, so neither of the Silk twins. Redheads for the win.
IDidn'tSignUp4This chapter 18 . 6/19
The banter between Vader and Ahsoka in this chapter was great.
Brievel chapter 18 . 6/19
*still secretly shipping Luke with literally anyone but Jade*
EmlynMara chapter 18 . 6/19
So Palpatine is set on an acting career? Definitely not an expected choice ;-). Leia is an awful hypocrite.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 18 . 6/19
LOL for Leia having to leave her 'innocent little brother' and his chastity under the protection of three young, attractive ladies very much into him :-P
holyscythe chapter 18 . 6/19
well its a sad day that there will only br 2 more chapters, i really like this story alot.
so i am hopping that you get more insparation and want to write more.
from an old fan.
have a nice day.
LittleRobinRedbreast chapter 18 . 6/19
"'He's so young,' Leia explained wrapping an arm around her brother..." ...She does realize they're the exact same age? In fact, Luke is actually a few minutes older. XD XD XD

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a few chapters. Life's been crazy and all that. This fic has been a fun, wild ride. This concept never would have occurred to me, and I'm so glad it occurred to you. Thank you for sharing.

Also, congrats on publishing your Pride and Prejudice story!
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