Awww. Sweet Goten

i liked it, short and sweet!

it was a short but very cute story! r u writing a sequel? goten is so sweet bra need to see him more than just a friend. and soon. i love bra & goten!Ja Ne!

Wow, that was a great story! I loved it! Do a squeul please!

Aw Niichan, I think this is the sweetest thing you've ever written. I love it so much. *hugs* I'm sorry things are like this for you when you deserve so much more.

aww..poor GOTEN! I would not turn that hottie down what is bra thinkin! SIGN!

AW! Again, you have done it! You made a perfect little story of Goten and Bra (even though this did't have the fluffiest ending). I actually totally forgot about G/B's for quite awhile...I wrote mine back in what, February? Heh, guess I wasn't that high on writing my own until aftr I did it. O.o; Now my new obsession is Bra/Yamcha. Don't ask...anyway! Really, really nice fic you got here. And update Sweet Dreams soon!

That was so brillant! so real!

I felt your emotion in it.

GREAT work. i love G/B!

What a sweet one off. I personally liked it, maybe you should do a reply from Bra's point of view. Just a thought.

Very beautiful. I'm such a sucker for G/B!

Please write a sequel!