| Reviews for Pretending, I: Witness |
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   michelynn96 chapter 34 . 7/13 First of all, this story was absolutely awesome! Finish it in a day, you know. I rerun TM because i suddenly miss it so much and one thing lead to another. I suddenly also missed reading TM ff, so reread ff regarding it and just looked for another to read (despite being so sure I've read it all) and boy, I found your story! THANK YOU for writing this (and other TM ff). Brilliant. You nailed their characterization well, loved how the story flowed and all. Definitely fav-ing your stories and you! Thank you for making this very very very enjoyable journey. Waiting patiently for another great stories (not a pressure to write I hope.), xoxo, misel ps: gonna keep returning to TM ffn every once in a while, found a gem and ready to find more of this! |
| Idan chapter 34 . 7/12 It sounds like we missed some exciting stuff, but I can’t object to skipping to the good parts! This was such a lovely story, and it’s definitely been a bright spot of the last few months. Thank you for sharing it with us! I’m glad to hear there will be other stories, and meanwhile good luck with the writing! |
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/9 Just what I needed. Thank you. |
| Joey Burdziuk chapter 34 . 7/9 Wonderful. Though i was expecting that Jane might repropose to Lisbon with all the candles r.i.p make it a real memory lol. I am so happy to know there will be more TM stories coming from you, they are an absolute pleasure to read. Keep safe yourself, and wish you happy writing! |
| Kadesch chapter 34 . 7/11 Beautiful story! It‘s so good to see there are still Mentalistas out there. Love to read more stories from you! Personally I wouldn‘t mind more sexy times since we didn‘t get a lot in the show but a good storyline is important as well. |
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/8 Me encanta tu forma de escribir, espero que sigas escribiendo historias en este fandom, eres una de mis escritoras favoritas! |
| Mariana-Anne chapter 34 . 7/10 increible historia, una de las mejores que he leido. tienes un donde para escribir, porque lo haces de una manera increible, amo tus historias,sigue escribiendo, no dejes que nadie te apague sigue brillando |
| DSPallas chapter 34 . 7/9 Their next great adventure? Oh i hope you have some others in store! Thanks for finishing this story on a positive and promising note for our dear characters, after a restless chapter. Take a well deserved rest from the fan fiction world, and hoping to read you soon. |
| JB chapter 34 . 7/7 What a lovely ending ! You tied everything up so well and the re-proposal was perfect. Send us all home happy - thank you so much. You are easily the best writer on this platform IMHO and I eagerly look forward to any further stories you bring us. Thank you again. |
| Ilovetea chapter 34 . 7/6 Perfect ending for a wonderful story! Jane making plans for their future put a big smile on my face. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us! It’s great to hear that you have more ideas for TM in store and I can’t wait to read all of them... But take your time and I’m sure everyone here will be waiting patiently - more or less ;) |
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/6 Great story! Don’t wait too long for the next one. Enjoy wrlting for awhile. |
| Cam chapter 34 . 7/6 This was wonderful and so heart touching. Thank you for this story! |
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/6 Amazing story, thank you! |
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/6 I really wish you don’t intend on stopping here, we need more love, just the two of them enjoying themselves... |
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/6 A lovely end to a great story. Very many thanks. And Jane's 'stay married' proposal was sweet. |
