ok interesting, let's see what happens further ahead, I hope you continue at some point, greetings.

Please update this soon

Some misused words but otherwise good job keep it up

Well there are some Sekirei that have Ashikabi that are unknown so if you didn’t want to steal from other characters you could use one of them or have him save one of the ones who are going be winged forcefully or there is a chance of him getting number 4 or 104 since they don’t like theirs in the series plus the scenarios between Naruto and number 4 would be interesting with their conflicting personalities one with a hero complex and the other hating humans though the one thing they might potentially have in common is a love of battle

Love the start
Yahan, Tsukiumi and Kaho should definately be added as are my favorites
Hibiki, Hikari, Akitsu, Natsu, Uzume and Yashima are some worth considering too
Also fill in the unknown numbers with other anime characters

Well, looks interesting... İ will keep an eye on this. Good luck with the story!

That was foreboding at the end!

Sigh. I won't be reading this because it's not actually a naruto crossover. He's not a ninja, doesn't use chakra, wasn't born in konoha.

You wanna write an oc ashikabi who can fight, fine. but don't list it as a crossover with naruto, just to make him an OC named naruto who happens to look like naruto uzumaki, it's just false advertising for folks like me, who came for an actual naruto crossover.

Cool start to the story and look forward to seeing what happens next. I do however think that maybe you should take #09 Tsukiumi from Minato as well and give her to Naruto.

This could lead to some interesting/funny interactions and situations between Tsukiumi, Kazehana, a nd Naruto when around Naruto's Mom given how you have stated that Kushina is "Old School" making her kind of similar to #09 Tsukiumi.

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon

Kazehana?

so that means, naruto likely won't wing a single number sekirei?
Since:
-02, 03, 06, 08 and 09 are minato's
-01 is too much old for naruto and not really a fighter
-05 is a male and like in most harem like shonen fics, males fighter-servant are mostly banned from the MC team list.

So only 04 and 07 remains, but could be hard since 04 is the obsessive loyal MBI lap dog and 07 is a defect sekirei that can't be winged and also in mikogami team.

could be fun to see how this'll play out

I really like this! I always love a good Sekirei Oc or Naruto fanfic! :3

Maybe add Karasuba to his Sekirei? I really love her and she is my fav. :3

or

make him the unofficial or reluctant master of the discipline squad instead or Natsuo? Minaka could force him to join MBI if he promises to cure Chiho since they surely have the medical equipment to easily save her. :)

I also really like Naruto having such a goal to save Chiho!

Can I or We make suggestions for his Sekirei Flock?

I mean,

I would definitely want Karasuba, but if you go with my idea or Naruto being the reluctant captain/master of the discipline squad then I would also like Benistubasa and Haihane? The discipline squad does not really need their Ashikabi, so they could still play their role without Naruto knowing.

Kazehana is already in planned, I think. :)
Karasuba
Haihane
Benitsubasa

Yume? Maybe let him resurrect her? She could absorb all his enourmous chakra and get a new Sekirei core (I mean if you don't plan to make him use justu's then it's ok I guess and this method would be really unique, since that never happend before! :3

Akitsu? Because she is my fav after Karasuba and Naruto's loving personality could really help her. :)
Brain type Sekirei: Kochō (She is sadly the only known brain type sekirei if we don't count Matsu) :/
Taki because she is using mist and basically fights asassin style like Zabuza and her designe is really unique! :3

Sorry for my bad grammar, my native language is german. :3

I really look forward to chapter 2! :)

Thanks for the awesome chapter.