Reviews for Guardians of the Disney Kingdom
Keyblade Master of Light chapter 8 . 9/24
Well, it's nice to see another update for this story and now they're visitors/prisoners of Beasts' castle and just like in the previous version, we meet Anakin in Beast's castle. Will they find Belle and help her patch things up with Beast? Guess we'll have to find out in the next chapter.
FairySinGirl chapter 8 . 9/21
Poor Anakin, that was just uncalled for when the Beast struck him in the face with his claws even though he was trying to explain. I hope Danyal will be able to help him get that treated.
Also I hope Maurice and Nausicaa will be able to get Nausicaa's leg treated once they arrive back in the village.
Gamelover41592 chapter 8 . 9/20
excellent work on this chapter and thanks for doing beauty and the beast
SexAndToast chapter 1 . 7/18
You've got the right tone if you're going for a mythical fairy tale setting. The child speaking poetically at the verge of death is similar to the fables I remember reading, and while not for everyone, that tone is hard to capture.
Keyblade Master of Light chapter 7 . 6/28
Well, after seeing the heroes go through Cinderella, it was very satisfying to see Tremaine and Drizella get what they deserved and it was nice to see Anastasia to be excused. So, it seems now that next up is Beauty and the Beast, considering in the previous version, that was where the heroes went to next. And it looks like Omar is now caught in the story, so I wonder what will happen next.
mary.okeeffe.16 chapter 1 . 6/25
A prologue in the 1950s, rad!
FairySinGirl chapter 7 . 6/23
Lol! I like how you had them punish Lady Tremain and Drizella, at least they got what they deserved for always treating Cinderella so poorly.
Gamelover41592 chapter 7 . 6/22
excellent work on this chapter and glad the succeeded
CartoonCrossoverMaster chapter 2 . 6/18
A great start so far! I admire the descriptive writing and how you gave each character a unique personality and wardrobe. I'm eager to read what happens next! ;)
FairySinGirl chapter 6 . 6/13
I'm curious to know what Jeanette's punishment for Lady Tremain will be now that she turned back into a human after getting her pumpkin gun.
I'm glad Danyal's gonna try to comfort Cinderella after she was just locked in the attic by her stepmother.
Gamelover41592 chapter 6 . 6/13
excellent work on this chapter and hopefully they can help cinderella
Keyblade Master of Light chapter 5 . 4/18
Well, after reading all five chapters so far, I really liked how you rebooted this story, even though, I liked the original series, but this is still good either way. I like how Natius' and Danyal's characters are played out and how they start their journey to get back home. One Disney world down, onto the next one. Looking forward to what happens next.
preciouslittletoonette chapter 5 . 4/15
I would like to stress the idea that you do not need to introduce characters that have been introduced before again. Describing the character once is enough. I got confused around the scene between the dreams as I wasn't sure when the dream ended. And your grammar could use a bit of work. It's also not necessary to rewrite a certain scene from the movies because most people would already know what happened.

Anyway, I look forward to seeing Cinderella
preciouslittletoonette chapter 2 . 4/15
This chapter was alright but I noticed you reintroduced Zander twice which isn't necessary. The readers are already aware of who Zander is so there's no need for more description. A few mistakes here and there. The teacher's dialogue felt rather random. Other than that, the chapter was okay
FairySinGirl chapter 5 . 4/14
Now that they completed Snow White, it's onto the next world now which I'm guessing is obviously Cinderella.
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