This is so good

Well as much as I hate a story left unfinished... Kinda happy it is cause at least it won't end where it looks to be going(With Percy broken and turning on his friends)

I would have prefered if percy was the only one to come to remnant, but Im still excited to see how percy manages to either escape or how the others plan to rescue him

Update please...

I stayed up until the 7:00 a.m. just to finish the first part and i can't wait to see how this second part goes, I'm really hiped about rwby and jnpr meeting... jptn? Jtnp? Well you knoe, jason thalia nico and piper

Can’t wait to see the rest! Hope you’re doing well!

I’m glad you’re back and I’m excited to read more

Oh yeah more please!

Damn bro I dropped off and am now back, this be harsh, also half expected Percy to laugh at his torture saying ha this isnt even close to 1% of the pain I felt while trapped in Tartarus! Keep on updating!

Love that other demigods got brought over hopefully their demigod awesomeness will open a can of whoop ass on them grim, live this story can't wait for the next chapter.

I liked that last line... Let's sayyyy... Too much. Been a while since I commented, I still think your writing, short or long, is a treat. ;-) Dark Percy Overdone? Yes. Can you pull it off if you keep it believable? Yes. Just be careful! - Ely

just a few cracks and Percy will begin to realise that there is water inside of the human body.

the wait meens nothing as long as you keep up the great quality

Oh holy crap there’s actually a 100k word series with PJO and RWBY rofl

This is a very good story. Just one thing I hope you don't do is have anyone capable of actually messing with "godly" dna. I think it seems stupid for it to work somehow and I believe Canon had no dna for gods.

Looking forward to more