I am loving this story.
From your writing, it's hard for me to believe you are as young as your author's note says. It's... miraculous.

Keep at it.

Honestly, this is an amazing fanfic. I'm really impressed. I'm still kind of confused if you are still going to continue it, but I definitely hope you'll keep writing. You definitely have a talent for it. This most recent chapter made me smile. My marichat heart! I love how you've written the beginning of their dynamic, it's beautiful. Squeee! I've just loved reading everything. Thank you.

Keep on writing! I find this story compelling, and can't wait for more.

I love this story, PLEASEEEEE write more soon!

I’m not super pleased with Kagami’s behavior. It was just...cruel. Mean. It doesn’t bode well for their relationship at all. Luka at least doesn’t seem so pushy and forceful. I want to see Marinette and Chat finally talk for the first time.

I love it!
Please continue, I'ill waiting the next chapter

NEW CHAPTER?

Feel proud! I really really really really really really really really really really really really really like this story

Begginer or not. That was an awesome chapter!

I saw this and thought, why not? But, Holy Cow! This is really well written. Having everything planned out for the lucky charm. Dang! Also, I adore lukanette, and when it had having the parallels to Glaciator I wanted to cry. My heart! I am very excited for the next chapter, and to see where this goes. Thank you for your continued writing. : )

Hey for being a new writer, this is pretty good. And don’t worry so much about updating on time. We all get distracted by regular life and FanFiction is supposed to be for fun. True, all of us can get annoyed when a story we like doesn’t get updated for awhile, but please take your time and post when you can! People matter more than content! But I am happy that you have got the writing bug and seem to be motivated to write a lot more! If you ever want someone to hard core edit your stuff, feel free to ask me :)

Starlin’s Ghost

I love it, I’m justo here for this, plus you are REALLY good at writing, keep up the good work! Can’t wait for the next chapters

I really liked this. Tbh I believe the best way for the show to get Adrien and Marinette together is through Marichat, but I really want to know how you would fix the love square.

Poor blind little babies!

damn I loved this! This is an amazing start! :) You captured all of Marinette's emotions perfectly, I can totally imagine this happening. So excited to read more of this! (it broke my heart how Mari started thinking about Chat at the end) *thumbs up*