Damn, man. I honestly wasn’t expecting that for how the chapter ended. Let it be known that this Episode VII isn’t just going over A New Hope Again, hell there’s a level of despair for the heroes I don’t think I’ve seen since Empire Strikes Back.

Also, I really liked how you wrote Finn in this chapter. I wonder if he’s just going to be as high as a Jedi on the First Order’s shitlist the longer he’s on the run.

trying to figure out the parings here, you do realize that ahsoka is over 70 by the time of the sequel trilogy right? She was 17 when Luke was born and its 19 years later when A New Hope takes place so she'd be 36, than Return of the Jedi is about 5 years after that so she'd be 41, than the sequel trilogy is about 30 years after so she'd be 7, not interested in reading about a teen/young adult boning the elderly.

Damien? Cowboy hat? The hell is that dude, did this man Came from earth or something...

YES! YES! YES! THE AWESOME FAN-MADE STAR WARS STORY LIVES!
HUZZAH!
Zer0 LIVES! (STOMP STOMP)
Bio LIVES! (STOMP STOMP)
Damien LIVES! (STOMP STOMP)

Hey look I am just speculating on character's actions, motives, and etc so far. Sure I can hold off the speculation information until we get into to the next episode. And don't worry about me, I can still wait. This awesome Star Wars story is your story to be told not me.

I still enjoy your fan-made battle. Sure that quick battle wasn't as huge as compared to Battle of Hoth, Battle of Geonosis, Battle of Kashyyyk, Clone Wars Battle of Coruscant, and etc, however, I strongly believed your quick and awesome battle is ten or hundred times better than Lucasfilm's stupid battle of Takodana. I give your fan-made battle execution a ten out of ten stars. :)

On the previous comment, I actually meant Commander Prye. Sorry I accidentally mixed up the military ranks. I also forgot to mention about General Hux's fan-made character. The ways you guys present Hux is a hundred times better than Disney's and Lucasfilms's dumb presentation. I say the way you guys have managed to present the bad guys is the best presentation that Star Wars Sequel Trilogy should have gotten.

Okay as long as Aspiring Creator STOPS whining and spreading his heresy messages then we shouldn't have any problems. Alright whoever is that other guy who is acting like a screaming rat is not worth our time and energy. Just ignore that other guy. And pretend that other guy doesn't exist.

Anyways. Great chapter update with a cool cliffhanger. I can't wait to see more in the future.
Just keep doing what you guys think is best for your awesome Star Wars story to be told.
Like I said before. I can still wait if your story needs to be polished and fixed.
Every good story always needs the creative time to grow and process for everyone to enjoy.
As long as I got something to read for relaxation I am all good.

Pretty good

I somehow feel like ‘I need hero’ would not be out of place here. Just me?

And IG coming in with clutch by spotting the stormtroopers before anyone else. While Rhasar managed to get a full on kill streak happening with a new weapon.

Keep living on (Stomp, Stomp!)

Holy Crap
That was intense!
Hoping to see more soon dude
And most definitely still anticipating more of the Devil May Cry stories!

I love this story so much that it kills me waiting for the next one. The characters are fantastic, the development, all of it. The fact your changing things but keeping small things similar is brilliant.

The only thing that could make this better? Prequel memes. You could never get enough prequel memes.

I can’t wait to see how the rest of this goes, the eventual involvement of Ahsoka, maybe we can get a cameo of Din and the child. That would be pretty mad.

Cheers for the brilliant chapter. Catch you guys at the next one.

Well, that pretty proves my thoughts on Hux being influenced by Thrawn lol. Will Thrawn himself be making an appearance of sort, or perhaps a mention of Hux being taught by him, or very least inspired?

Loved the scene of Arthon's self-nihilism peaking, actually got a small chill from him breaking the life debt. But it's a great testament to how y'all fleshed out his character thus far.

Nice little character development and fleshing out for Rey, plus cute scene with her and Damien at the end :). One step closer to clapping cheeks!

Loved Leia's interaction with Damien about the Force, though I wished her explanation for not being a Jedi was a bit more detailed (something like 'My brother walked his path, as I walked mine', inclining that her duty as a Princess/Senator/General was more suited for her).

That '-cen' name is gonna bother for the rest of the story -_-. I immediately thought of Jacen but I can't think of many names that end with '-cen'... Damnit! Could be Damien's real name, IDK.

Pretty much the only real criticism would be the vision itself, should've italicized it so it would be easier to discern from the past from present or at least that little line break thing from the Doc Manager. Overall, a stronger chapter than 5... 9/10.

I like the story that you guys have so far, now I have an idea for a location for you at the last movie and that’s the Valley of the Jedi from the game Dark Forces 2 if you already have something in mind then I’m sorry for wasting your time, and again love the story and plan for the sequel trilogy.

Awesome story mate hope to see more soon. And I think I've figured out Damien's past, he's the child of a certain Emperor's Hand and a certain Jedi Master, I think. I could be way off.

Jesus chrst I hate pathetic main character's. I was hoping that you were going to have him suck up and grow a pair but so far you have had Damien throw tantrum like a five year old when Arthon was leaving him and now you have him running away like a little bitch.

Guys I love the new version of Hux! This guy went from a pasty, angry bootlick to a smug, smooth sunnavabitch whose arrogance plays into the likableness of how you're portraying him. I am so pumped for the next installment. I also am now a believer in the fact that Starkiller base's main cannon is powered by a recording of IG's singing voice. Just saying.

Excellent chapter! I’m looking froward to the next.

Huzzah!
Zer0 LIVES! (STOMP, STOMP)
Bio LIVES! (STOMP, STOMP)
Damien LIVES! (STOMP, STOMP)

Wow, just wow. This fan-made Star Wars story just keeps getting better and better.
As for the cliffhanger ... Whelp the New Republic has officially chosen DEATH, DEATH DEATH, DEATH, DEATH...

I wasn't expecting that kind of fist brawl to happen. Can't say I really blame any of those Resistance fighters who all had lost a devastating battle to First Order much like when the Rebel Alliance lost their horrible land battle on Hoth against the Galactic Empire.
Same thing can be said with Arthon's home planet. I don't blame Arthon and his frustration.

Specking of Trandoshans, ... How did you guys created Arthon? Was Arthon creatively inspired from a certain Trandoshan bounty hunter, Bossk including a certain Old Republic assassin droid, HK-47? If so that is awesome. I really this original Trandoshan character. In fact, I bet 40,000 credit chips that Arthon can beat Disney Rebel's Zeb into a bloody mess. GO Arthon!

Specking of fighters, ... Was your Mandalorian character, Rhasar was inspired from the Mandalorian show, or other Mandalorian characters such as Jango Fett, Boba Fett, and etc? Just a wonder thought. Still curious on why was he was exiled. Was it some terrible event that earned him to be exiled from Mandalore? To be honest here, we will just have to wait and see in future updates.

Specking of flying jetpacks, ... At this point of time, now that I starting to get the pieces together from the previous chapters including this chapter on the Twilek character, Karine ... Isn't Karine the daughter of Hera Syndulla? If that is the case then ... who is the Father? And isn't there an older human brother or that guy doesn't exist in this story at all? Well all we can do is to wait.

Specking of droids, we can't forget about the our favorite original IG droid character.
I really wish I had an IG-11 or IG-88 droid as my companion partner.
If the IG droid model is a IG-100 MagnusGuard that would be even better.
I can't help smile at IG's funny humor moments.
Now that I think about it. Since IG is from the Clone Wars ... I can't imagine how IG is going to react when he confront the Force Ghost of Obi-Wan Kenobi. Well who knows what is going to happen in the future updates. It may happen or may not happen we will just have to wait and see.

Hmm. There is just something funny going on Damien's flashback and past. As if Damien is closely related to Luke Skywalker and the Skywalker family. Then again, we still need more evidence if that is true. There are still more chapter updates that we have yet to witness.

Specking of Damien, have you guys decided yet on how many lovely ladies are going to be Damien's love interests? You guys don't have to use the bonuses. The bonuses were just random tossups.
I would just keep the Legend ladies alive for Damien to keep.
As for the Disney Canon ladies well... Honestly I (DEEP SIGH) just don't care about them. I really don't care they all ended up in KIA.
Because nobody ever cares about whatever happens to any Disney Canon characters. Plus all Disney Canon female characters including Rey (Not your Rey version she is better in your fan-made story) are all just completely useless.
Unless you guys have a grand plan to make them work much like how you guys did for Commander Pryde which I am more impressed.

Plus you guys had made me like your Rey version. It just goes to show there is a better path that can be done in the right way with a grand plan.

By the way, still working on that upcoming Clone Wars story? Don't worry about me, my original characters, and other readers. We can still wait if that upcoming Star Wars story needs time to grow and develop with a grand plan.

So far so good. All I can say is that you guys got me hooked for the next update.
Remember just keep doing what you guys think is best for your awesome and ambitious fan-made Star Wars story. You guys are the Authors here. Not me.
Me and my original characters will be all waiting for you guys on the next update.