Wooo! I really loved this twist, I really can’t wait for the next chapter. You’re writing style really reflects the characters personality’s perfectly. Keep up the good work!

Well I'm sorry about how current events is affecting your mental health, but I hope you feel better soon. I will await you finishing the story patiently

I... I have no words, I thought this story was going to be a short simple one, but after reading the third chapter I understand (and hope!) that might not be the case.
Keep Going!

Nice fanfic.

In chapter 1 " and it was certainly wasn't about " could probably be " and it certainly wasn't about " and in chapter 2 "a had ripped majority of her skirt " could be "a had ripped the majority of her skirt ".

Thanks for writing and have a nice day!

this is good can't wait for next chapter

Dun dun dun let me guess runaan saw, or maybe found ezran

I loved the chapter, it was so nice, and am happy that this is not the end yet. i love your story, it's so good!
Good luck next chapter! :D

Oh Rayla Rayla Rayla... that's now why he reacted like that

This is good can't wait to read the next chapter.

Lol he fell for her

What "episode 13?" There are only 9 episodes per season.

I love it! You need to do more please.