| Reviews for Fate Dragoncrown (eng) |
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Archangel Xireon Chaos God chapter 32 . 7/15 Ya know, besides it being a little short...this ch. was one of my favorites I've read so far. Drunk Rin was a funny plus. Good job bruh! |
Ikasuki chapter 4 . 7/14 I thought wished were based on intent... already seing Rin here send massif red flag... The story begin with Artoria and Shirou... and here we already have the promise of a cheap harem... not good. WOuld he have revived Kirei and the old worm as well? I think not. Was Rin even dead? I will not comment on the - for dialogue as I know it is a french thing. But as you translated in english know that a lot of people are used to the "speach patern" more. |
The Sword chapter 31 . 6/29 Is Gilgamesh even reborn in this world? Because archer EMIYA was reborn and he died aginst Berserker way before the end of the holy grafik war. (Unleas he somehow becomes the kid betwen saber and shiro, it woulde be funny, like hella funny) |
Nemoskull chapter 1 . 6/6 why are quotation marks not good enough for you? what is wrong with you. |
N2 chapter 25 . 4/29 Continue please. |
Tetho chapter 4 . 4/26 For the love of God, please use qoutation marks for the dialogues. |
sawtooth44 chapter 25 . 4/22 the only way to "Kill" Merlin is to kill his ability to manifest independently |
victorsan12345 chapter 24 . 4/16 Where in canon does it said that? Honestly, I don't remember it. And even if it's canon then that's one of those things in the Nasuverse that make no sense. How can an ability available for every single member of two races be considered more rare than something only one human in hundreds millions can develop? That doesn't make sense. I get that in the modern era it may be true but still.. |
CrowKrowQrow chapter 1 . 4/5 Oh, very interesting beginning, good to see the Grail actually being used for once... Can't say I know much about Elder Scrolls lore, some of the Aedra and Daedra that I read out of curiosity and what you can gleam from playing Oblivion and Skyrim, still, putting Shirou and Artoria together in any medieval magic setting is a great start to any story. |
victorsan12345 chapter 23 . 4/4 I doubt Marble Phantasms are rarer than Reality Marbles. Any god, elemental and true ancestor can have one, basically every single member of those species can have one, meaning that they are far more common than something very few people have develop. |
sawtooth44 chapter 23 . 4/4 *4th wall breaks* HELLO FROM THE OTHER SIIIIIIIDE |
sawtooth44 chapter 22 . 3/28 pretty sure a Marble Phantasm is not like a Reality Marble a Marble Phantasm last i checked was explained with using a jar of 100 marbles, 1 white and 99 black and using a marble phantasm was enabling you to pick out the white marble 100% of the time in other words enabling a person evoke a natural phenomena no matter how unlikely it is like causing lightning to strike a person 4 times where as a Reality Marble is turning all those marbles blue also i think "From a world" should be changed to "From one world", since it flows better |
sawtooth44 chapter 20 . 3/16 ahh the return of the King in her full glory |
sawtooth44 chapter 17 . 2/14 in other words... we in the video game only pay attention to the gold coins other coins are there but we just ignore them |
StrahTGW chapter 16 . 2/6 Thanks for the chapter. |