Soon it'll be easier to name the girls that arent in the harem.

Seriously, Rias only had Akeno, Gasper, and Issei left

Rias is getting robbed of like half her peerage.

Last thing but the potential Wood style user is he going to be from Hashirama’s line or Tobirama’s line cause I’m kinda leaning towards hopefully Tobirama not just because then he’d get the silver hair

If he was Tobirama’s grandson hope he’d be more relaxed than Tobirama was

Also hope you change your mind on the wood style user not being able to be paired with Tsunade

So I really hope in the future of this after Hades is beaten instead of being taken away by the Evies I hope Zenki prevents that

Man I really do hope you have Meredith turning up at Zenki’s door one part because like Le Fay she’s a mega fan and one part because she wants his help mastering her Sacred gear

Zenki could a,so quickly identify it as a Longinus candidate gear

Speaking of lovely magician girls hope Lavinia is shown to be the contract magician of Zenki haha

Oh yeah with Akeno’s brother if he’s in Serafalls peerage will he still meet the other prominent members of the other factions under the pretext of working under Serafall since she is the Leviathan diplomacy is her area of authority after all

Also yep really hope the options for his Longinus are
Regulus Nemia
Boosted Gear
Telos Karma ( maybe give him another gear with this one to )

Maybe Star Buster Star Blaster just wish we knew the balance breaker

Oh and hope he’d get his fire bird well before the time Akeno gets her Oni mask

Plus could his battle attire have a slight resemblance to his fathers

Also don’t know why but I kinda hope he has long hair like Akeno haha but keeping his hair tied in a single braid

Avatar wise

Thank you for setting me at ease with saying the Oc is going to have his own view on how the world should be and have his own path

Also glad you like the idea of his initial team or as Azula would call them her fellow harem sisters ( fingers crossed haha ) or people she can tolerate haha

Oh yeah hope you don’t feel the need to pair Aang or Sokka with anyone since hopefully their respective love interests so Katara for Aang and Suki and Yue are all with the Oc again hopefully just because that’s the case doesn’t mean we have to see them paired with anyone

DxD wise

I know he’s not getting the True Longinus but if anything wouldn’t pairing that with his holy lighting make it even better instead of diminishing it

Naruto wise

Well good to know Sakura won’t be useless in the part 1 stage if she’s going to have cool moments haha and yeah I know calling her that is a meme but it’s not entirely wrong fun fact I only started liking Sakura a lot during part 2 and actually only liked Sasuke after Naruto beat him in their last fight

Anyway random point aside I do like the idea of Sakura training a bit more in the academy same deal with Ino when they get encouragement from the Oc

Also yes I hope he’s the top student in his class with a fan club but unlike sasuke who ignored them he interacts with them

Plus hope we get a scene where the Konoha girls go to Tsunade and she says ah you’ve come to learn how to seduce him have you haha

Glad Zabuza and Haki have a better chance of sticking around I can just picture Zabuza sitting their being very impressed when he sees the aftermath of the Oc slaughtering Gato and his thugs like it’s nothing

As for his Mangekyo Sharingan abilities fair enough on not giving him Amaterasu

With Kotoamatsukami by the way I’d go more with the second example you have on how he could use it after all he could use the eye to make all his foes turn on each other permanently so yeah he should definitely use it for more than redirecting one attack haha

Glad you liked the idea of him having the short range Kamui another benefit of that would be he could hit Tobi/Obito from the get go but as I said when it comes to full on warping and all that seeing him use Kaguya’s portals would be cool

Your also right in saying if he had Kotoamatsukami in one eye and Tsukuyomi in the other he would be the ultimate Genjustu Uchiha plus the ultimate Uchiha in general haha

Also happy you liked the ideas for his Susanoo weapons I have this image in my head of his Susanoo in its Humanoid/Armoured stage having four arms with each holding a different weapon so the drill Lance in one hand, the sword of Totsuka in another, the Yata mirror in another and another weapon in the fourth hand

Plus the sword and mirror shield would go from red to what ever colour his Susanoo is what colour you thinking by the way I know I said white before cough like Kaguya cough but what colours do you have in mind?

Oh yeah his full body Susanoo would just have the two arms like the others and his humanoid armoured form could also just have the two arms to the four arms could just be a special trick he pulls like Itachis has a two and four armed form

Ah love Ravel showing again why she’s the best manger/assistant honestly it’s one of the details that if she wasn’t the assistant of your DxD Oc I’d find that fact very uncomfortable haha

Zenki and Koneko’s moment together was lovely

Xenovia and Irina talking about Zenki while having their bath was nice to haha again just really happy with how clearly taken Irina is with Zenki and that both even Xenovia know Zenki ain’t someone they want to get on the bad side of

Shame Dohnaseek had to turn up and ruin such a lovely scene also I'm just going to assume despite the state of dress the two lovely current exorcist where in he didn’t see their most intimate places.. that’s saved for Zenki haha

I will however say I’m not entirely buying Dohnaseek of all freaking people could do as much damage as he did to Irina and Xenovia even if they couldn’t get ahold of their holy swords

Also that level of fear Dohnaseek had just before Zenki eliminated him that should have been with him the second he realised Zenki was in the same room as him haha but Dohnaseek is a utter idiot so what can you do haha anyway glad Zenki killed him and that he was then able to talk to Irina and Xenovia and give them some church approved items nice to know Gabriel did more than just ask Zenki to look out for the two she also contributed to his ability to help them

Again just love how clear it is that Irina is drawn and attracted to Zenki and that Xenovia is questioning herself about Zenki and all that relates to

Plus side note I love the irony that Zenki is just naturally good at drawing in holy girls and other types of girls to be fair haha and tempting them to “sin” while Diodora has to commit all his horrid acts to get that

Oh and the girls reaction when they saw Zenki just holding the holy light was great to

The departure scene was nice as was Rias and Akeno’s comments haha also love that Ravel could see Kuroka was up to something and I like how Zenki delegated who’s running things and to be fair Kuroka was probably going to push the day to day stuff onto Asia anyway haha so yeah it was nice seeing how happy Kuroka was with being left in charge also Yumi’s joy at learning Tosca will be out soon was great to

So I’m going to call the place Zenki and co arrived in a forest not a jungle given they are probably in England and all that haha anyway nice of Zenki to ease Arthur’s concerns over leaving Le Fay for a while

Isane bring the little Excalibur task force together was nice and nice to know the likes of Koneko being alright with Xenovia is predicated on when Zenki expressly says it’s okay with her now

Haha to be fair Irina was right if she could get ahold of Zenki he’d arrange for her and Xenovia to be feed haha also Irina hugging Koneko was cute to also little side detail of Saji suffering was fun for me to haha

Surprised Vali just didn’t kill the Minotaur that apparently doesn’t have Minotaur features to be fair you could have just made it a giant or something haha

Like the fact Koneko picked up on Isane’s plan is pretty much on the order of Zenki

Enjoyed the whole scene of the Excalibur Extermination team talking with Irina and Xenovia about their current situation and yes I went with extermination because if it was destruction it would sound like their a team revolving around Excalibur Destruction haha anyway glad the two groups are working together now

Also loved the irony of Xenovia saying she live through this to continue fighting for god yet when all is said and done it’s not God she’ll be fighting for haha oh and the fact Yumi knows this whole deal is Zenki’s idea is nice to

Zenki meeting with the fairies was also good to see and again for the things they’ll be fighting in getting to Excalibur ruler I hope they are strong to normal beings but to monsters like Zenki and Vali it’s a light warm up

to start by parts.
I liked the chapter you did well by respecting the canon and adding original content. I also liked that you were detailed with the gestures that were seen as that of Vali when facing the minotaur.
two poor isane will receive the same punishment that was applied to issei and now xenovia is beginning to consider that zenki is not bad and of the perverted actions of isane is targeting irina's chest and most likely that she will touch it before she go away
Three who would say that each supernatural faction has its own gastronomy? Of course it is common sense but it is still fun to think about.
four was my imagination or the kingdom of fairies was similar to the land of the wizard of oz and that the excalibur rule is in the ocean the question is how it got there and where is it in the atlantic, the pacific, the triangle of Bermuda or even Atlantis

- I like how Dohnaseek's name is mispronounced here.
- So they're going to seek Excalibur Ruler, huh? Looks like they're having fun along the way.
- Well, Excalibur Team is a go. Let's see how they fare.

Great to see this updated! Wow, Dohnaseek made a comeback only to get killed off immediately. I guess Zenki really can be brutal when he has to be, huh? I can't help but wonder what Kuroka has planned, that naughty kitty~ That bit with the fairies was kinda cute. Seeing everything develop with the mission to destroy Excalibur is nice, can't wait to see what happens there, if it's any different from canon. But of course, I'm most interested in seeing Zenki and company's mission to get Excalibur Ruler. This is a very interesting plot.

Awesome update. Excalibur hidden under the sea. Is it the lost city of Atlantis. That would be cool. Really looking forward to reading more.

Great story! Really enjoying what you've posted so far! Looking forward to future chapters!

I am rather interested in future interactions between Zenki and Ingvild, being descendants of the original Maou. Also, I'm assuming Zenki will have some sort of dragon-related artificial Sacred Gear in the future, and Ingvild has her dragon-manipulating Sacred Gear, so there's that as well.

This just popped into my head so wanted to say it while I remember when we get to the point Zenki is actively leading the underworld so around the point canon is at or just before if Zenki is speaking to Zekram about who the new satans will when he says he has no issue with any candidate can Zenki just politely say “ your opinion means little on the matter” just further driving home the fact Zenki is the absolute ruler of the underworld a fact Zekram accepts

Also will we see Zenki just get named as the head of Astaroth in the future

It was certainly a pleasant surprise to see this updated haha

Loved the chapter of course

Liked seeing the first half of Zenki getting to Excalibur Ruler and the other treasure that could be sealed away with it like I say hope it’s really no hassle at all for Zenki and co to get to the sword

Also enjoyed his bit with Irina and Xenovia this chapter

Real review will come later but yeah just happy we got a new chapter here haha

Finally,thanks for the chapter.