The episode should have been about the sisters getting their bnb long over due karma for how they abused Lincoln in Sluthe and luck and also they along with Lynn Sir overreacted to the clogged toilet something that's a minor crime that should just he brushed off, I mean really what's THAT big of a deal as they can fix it themselves and not pay a sleazy plumber also the Ed's and Peter Griffin did WAY damage when they destroyed Johnny and Clevelands houses the latter many times and nobody hot on their asses about it , through the cul de sac kids wre mad but quickly got over it.

Wow! Now Lincoln and Clyde may be having themselves a real mystery to take on here! I have a gut feeling as to where this may end up, and I'm loving it! Lori was real mature in this part, and seeing her console Lincoln was awesome!

Yeah, I agree that the episode made Lincoln and Clyde seem selfish, and the whole thing with the cat just seemed out of character for them. I think I know who's paying these costumed bandits (pardon the cliche). The scene where Luan found Lincoln and Clyde was deep man, it felt nice.

Ok first off

1 how is this Lincoln got the main in the fanfic exsistong to the loud house universe those girls say they got atturnies

And the judges are the worst villains

The guy who played Bugs bunny and Daffy Duck and woody woodpecker now out of character playing a mean ace savey judge

First you made sister phobia and it makes sense then you made worth and you made a decent fanfic that would make a realistic fanfic to the Green Devil episode

And now This is why They can’t make a kings of the con fanfic that will effect the Loud House universe I’m sorry for my complain but I gave it 2 thumbs down. This is a train wreck your better then this why does that the judges would’ve got sued by Lincoln and Cyide for not credited him as Based on the Characters created by Lincoln Loud and Cyide McBride theirs no way Lincoln and Cyide can be in the ace savey movie in the Loud House plot witch is based on your fanfic. And the movie would’ve using illigal characters from a kids comic.

Not sure if it's intentional or not but you wrote that his phone died when Lori tried to call him, so how did he look at the time after that.

Sorry if I ruin the joke or anything, just want to make sure since I can't stop being curious.

One thing I want to know is... HOW THE HELL DID THIS SLIP RIGHT UNDER MY NOSE!?

I swear this is one of those stories that I would instantly click and read, not because of the author (you're great BTW) but because no-one and no mean NO-ONE has done a story on King of the Con yet.

Sure it's going to be short but that doesn't matter, what matters is that this really improves the episode, shows how it should have been done and what truly could have been done with the episode instead of what it was.

An absolute cringe fest if you ask me and I can see why it's up there with the most hated episodes.

I love that everyone here actually had their personality and isn't voiceless or just there for the sake of being there.

I actually slightly dislike the judges at the moment, legally Lincoln would have ownership of the full house gang as he designed and made them and no doubt actually had his name on the comic he made and sent for his comic. Them claiming that it was 'Something their lawyers could sort' really annoyed me.

Can't wait for the final chapter to see what is going to happen. Great work, keep it up.

Very nice. The conversation between Lincolna nd his sisters was moving and I'm glad with how they stood up for him. And it looks like the boys have got a major case on their hands now. Looking forward to part 3

Don't worry about the wait, it's better to recover from an illness. So this Two Parter has been expanded into a 3 Parter and this bratty rich kid wants the Cat from the episode for whatever reason.

It was heartwarming how Lori apologized to Lincoln for belittling his interests before and Luan recalling her predicament from "Head Poet's Anxiety" to relate to Lincoln. It was also heart warming of the sisters to try to convince the judges to give Lincoln & Clyde a fair chance even if some of their methods were questionable. I can't help but wonder if Bill Buck might show up in the next chapter, he could set the record straight about Lincoln's part in the creation of the characters his sisters are playing.

The new Ace Savvy costume Lincoln got does acknowledge how super hero costumes change over time and one of the thieves taking Lily's toy was a good way to get the Loud Family & Clyde into the conflict; it also worked well when Lincoln & Clyde ended up helping a security guard realize that the cameras have been tampered with for a while.

I look forward to reading Part III when it's ready and seeing if it sheds more light on this rich brat & his motives.

Malditos jueces. Es peor que esos jueces de "Really Loud Music" que quisieron cambiar a Luna.

I see what's happening here. We're doubling down on what Clyde told Lincoln about doing something stupid to really hammer home how dim he's been.

Can anyone make a tvtropes for this fanfic story?

Again, we have the problem that defines Lincoln: he has no real idea who the people around him are. All he sees are feet trampling him and thinks it's on purpose.

So the Kitty stole Lily's doll. Nice to have back at this story BTW.

excellent work on this chapter and this is how the episode should have gone though I don't think Lincoln should blame his sisters since he was the one embarrassing himself

You know the worst part? The sisters did MUCH worse. By taking that car and doing god kniws how much damage. Yet they get off scot free. It's why I quit watching the show anymore. Lincoln was out of character and made an idiotic worthless loser and the world is just AGAINST him anymore...