| Reviews for Ten Days Abroad |
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Jling chapter 18 . 8/2 I’m truly loving this story |
SkyBell1272 chapter 18 . 8/2 So happy to hear that I didn’t miss anything! Thanks for clarifying. I’m so intrigued with this story and everything that is happening, there are so many threads to follow, I can’t wait to see where this goes. |
Guest chapter 18 . 7/29 Heya me again with a suggestion. BTW I really like this fanfic, it shows the friendship that they've built to be really strong and natural and now maybe for it to turn into something else. I love this aspect compared to others where they fall in love imediately. Suggestion: clary could over hear jace and his mother having a discussion about her hand and when his mother is angry she uses his full name JCH and then he sees that clary overheard. They then possibly have a heart to heart about they pasts with his last name and clarys father(something they've never fully done with anyone else) . This could add more confusion to they feeling for eachother as they confided in eachother and don't know what to do with their feelings |
clacepercabeth4ever chapter 18 . 7/28 Gosh, I want Clary and Jace to get together in this soon so bad, lol. This chapter was really good, and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Beautiful Evil chapter 18 . 7/28 I really liked this chapter and can't wait to read more! I really like you take on Clary and Jace! |
SkyBell1272 chapter 17 . 7/26 I’m so glad that I originally misread the chapter title. I’m not exactly sure how/what I read it as, but I was worried there were only three days left, and I wasn’t sure how the story could progress/wrap up without being too rushed. Maybe Jace is getting more feelings than he is letting on, or maybe Clary is oblivious, I can’t decide. Jace is still quite a mystery to me. Still loving the Max portion of the chapters. It was nice to see a little sibling bonding. The cats are a complete mystery to me, did I miss something? |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/21 Maybe for the favour: after clary goes back to America, her and jace stay in contact. jaces home life becomes bad, so turns up one day at clarys door saying he's moving to America and the favour is to let him stay at her house. Then they develop their friendship even more and then all of jaces friends move to America for university/college so it brings the grok up together. Maybe the group even move in together? |
Guest chapter 17 . 7/19 i loved reading this. |
clacepercabeth4ever chapter 17 . 7/18 This chapter was really good! I really, really, really love the way that you write Clary and Jace in it, and I'm really excited to see what happens next between them. (Also, I really want to find out more about whatever the secrets that Jace is hiding from her are!) Anyways, I can't wait until the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/12 Lovely story |
clacepercabeth4ever chapter 16 . 7/7 This chapter was really good! I really enjoyed the Magnus, Alec, and Max parts, and I'm super excited for Clace! I'm definitely looking forward to see what happens next. |
SkyBell1272 chapter 16 . 7/7 Always enjoy the Max perspective! Really enjoyed the Max/Magnus/Alec dynamic here. Looking forward to more. |
OliviaWhite55 chapter 16 . 7/7 This is a great chapter and love the way max is but I hope Alec comes out of the closet soon. Can't wait for clace though! |
clacepercabeth4ever chapter 15 . 7/2 This story's really good! I love the way you write Clary and Jace in it SO MUCH. I hope you update soon! |
Jling chapter 15 . 7/1 Really nice chapter. I wonder if this friendship Jace and Clary will develop into something more? |