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Love vs. Sex

A teenage girl about 17 had gone to visit
some friends one
evening
and time passed quickly as each shared
their
various experiences of the past year.

She ended up staying longer than
planned,
and
had to walk home alone. She wasn't
afraid
because it was a small town and she lived
only
a
few blocks away.

As she walked along under the tall elm trees,
Diane asked God to keep her safe from
harm
and
danger.

When she reached the alley, which was a
short
cut to her house, she decided to take it.

However, halfway down the alley she
noticed
a
man standing at the end as though he
were
waiting
for her.

She became uneasy and began to pray,
asking
for
God's protection.

Instantly a comforting feeling of quietness
and
security wrapped round her, she felt as
though
someone was walking with her.

When she reached the end of the alley,
she
walked right past the man and arrived
home
safely.

The following day, she read in the
newspaper
that
a young girl had been raped in the same
alley
just
twenty minutes after she had been there.

Feeling overwhelmed by this tragedy and
the
fact
that it could have been her, she began to
weep.

Thanking the Lord for her safety and to
help
this
young woman, she decided to go to the
police
station.

She felt she could recognize the man, so
she
told
them her story.

The police asked her if she would be
willing to
look
at a lineup to see if she could identify
him.

She agreed and immediately pointed out
the
man
she had seen in the alley the night
before.

When the man was told he had been
identified,
he
immediately broke down and confessed.

The officer thanked Diane for her bravery
and
asked if there was anything they could do
for
her.

She asked if they would ask the man one
question.

Diane was curious as to why he had not
attacked
her.

When the policeman asked him, he
answered, "Because she wasn't alone.
She
had
two tall men walking on either side of
her."

Amazingly, whether you believe or not,
you're
never alone. Did you know that 98 of
teenagers
will not stand up for God?

Repost this as Love vs. Sex if you truly
believe
in
God..

PS: God is always there in your heart and loves you no matter what... and if you stand up for him he will
stand up for you.
I bet 93 of you people that read this won't repost

If you believe in Jesus Christ put this in your profile and don't just ignore this, because in the Bible it says if you deny me, I will deny you in front of my Father in the gates of Heaven.

This is SO INTRIGUING! AAAAHHHHHHHH!
yay. Thank you for sharing this with us!
Have a Wonderful Wonderful day!

Wow, honestly I had my reservation for this story, but now? I am glad that I decided to give it a try. Have a favourite.

Cross-posting review from SB.

The praise I've seen so far is well deserved! You're basically hitting all the right ques. You've got an enigmatic narrator who projects an immense sense of solemnity and a sort of majesty that goes beyond the aura of a monarch, and into the realm of something divine. Despite that, the first thing we see is them calling themselves a parasite. It's probably this juxtaposition that first drew me in to your story. Achieving that on the first line isn't an easy feat!

Then there's the Simurgh, who is being spoken to. I can't say I've ever felt this close to a character's internal thoughts without them saying a single word before. I've read some 2nd person stuff before, but to say this plainly, I'd rather read more of your fic than continue The Fifth Season. Granted, there are various factors involved, but I think the ultimate difference is that so far N.K. Jemisin just doesn't make me care, whereas your style speaks to me so much right from the beginning, even without considering the fact that I'm familiar with one of the fandoms.

I'm honestly searching for some criticism right now, but coming up short so far and I don't want to hurt my brain over it, so I'll leave it there.

In a sea of "another one of these? Geez.", this one definitely sticks out. So far it's well written and unique, and you've very much caught my interest. In fact, I find myself fascinated to the degree where I can't quite formulate a proper review. Regardless, I look forward to see where you take it.

This is terrible. Try writing something good.

I confess, I like this story.

This is well-written, quality content with a premise I haven't really seen before. I'm just hoping this doesn't immediately die.