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Spelling error ""Its nice to meet you as well Mira, I thought you would be utterly rude or a drunk like Uncle Qrow." Runy snickered at her uncle who got annoyed at the insult." Runy is supposed to be Ruby. Other than that it is great.

"The first girl, who ruby found rather interesting...and really attractive. Who had blonde hair and chocolate brown hair, she wore a green dress with a bow on the chest area with her hair up, as if she just got back from a party." Doesn't seem right. I think Lucy should be chocolate brown eyes and wasn't her dress a maroons color? Or I that after they reached the underwater section and changed clothes?

So Ruby has a large amount of family in Fairy Tail, her 'dad' is Raven (she got a dick), and she's like a vampire.

damn not bad can't wait to see what happens next