| Reviews for Everywhere at Once |
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Guest chapter 56 . 7/25 I'm now picturing Doko as some sort of spy kid LOL. I love the fact that you are somehow making Izuku X Hado and Ibara X Hanta work! An interesting change in the story is that in the Canon the gravity of Gentle and Le Brava sneaking in to UA was pretty weak(other than Eri), BUT NOW there is a lot on the line: UA's reputation, Class 1-A's reputation, the lifting of the mood, and some budding relationships. I'd say the the gravity of the situation has multiplied to a point where I'm actually rooting against Gentle and La Brava. |
Yamajiji chapter 56 . 7/25 Really hope Izuku and Nejire do end up together, it really is one of my favorite pairings. Wonder how Gentle will fuck things up though, but we’ll just have to wait and see. Nice chapter i really liked the dynamic between Nejire and Izuku. Looking forward to the next one. |
Ford Marches On chapter 55 . 7/24 This sht is gooooood. Man that was a satisfying read! You do good work, and more importantly you change it up naturally. I can honestly say that your character belongs in that series more than mineta does by a long shot. Loved the twist with Kaminari, despite me not buying into it being canon. Anyway, good job on the work, and thanks for posting it where I can read it! |
Beleivedbard chapter 55 . 7/12 This is a great story and I can't wait for more. I'm also interested to see where your going with Midoriya and Nejire. |
Guest chapter 55 . 7/12 Great chapter, the ships showcased were all very nice interactions. I like that they are all being developed at a reasonable pace and are not being forgotten. I also like the fact that the idea of getting everyone's moods up with this mini festival plan fits perfectly with the get Eri to smile plan in the canon. |
Mister Procarionte chapter 55 . 7/11 Man I have read your story twice now and I can say that is my personal favourite in the site. The character development, the story (drifting from canon, but not too much), the main focused characters (those normally unseen) and their personalities and everything are super well built, and your skills in writting and telling stories are astounding to say the least. Also the way you manage to mix the canon story and your world feels natural, almost in a way that I feel that doko is a part of canon. I made an account just to follow you and your fanfic and I think it was the best decision I made. I hope you keep the amazing work, thanks for sharing this. (Sorry if my expressions are not the best, I'm from Chile and we speak spanish :p) |
Random65 chapter 1 . 7/11 PLEASE CONTINUE! |
Yamajiji chapter 55 . 7/11 Nice chapter. Wonder how you’re going to change up the culture festival. Izuku is going to ask out Nejire, but I’m not sure if she would say yes. She’s kind of sending him mixed signals, so idk, but I hope she says yes. |
OLDONOM chapter 55 . 7/11 Great chapter, still hoping for izuocha. Still this story updates are always enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work. |
FireSharingan359 chapter 17 . 7/9 So I liked the fight but bakugo would not have tried to kill him over words bakugo has always made sure to hurt them just enough but not kill him now you could argue since todoroki survived the blast your character could so bakugo wasn't trying to kill him but todoroki had a huge wall of ice defending him and bakugo thought he was going to use his fire so here it just doesn't make sense even if your character made bakugo mad he wouldn't handle it that way |
Guest chapter 54 . 7/9 Wow, good chapter, I can't wait to see what Mina and the class come up with. Hopefully Doko's Quirk doesn't end up being too bad for the universe or something. |
Yamajiji chapter 54 . 7/7 Oh fuck, are creatures from the Void making it in here? This sounds like the Abyss from “The Dark Below” (MHA fanfic), and I’m all for it. |
Guest chapter 53 . 7/3 Good chapter |
Guest chapter 53 . 7/2 Neat chapter, I was crying from laughter during the Unified Friend Group Quadrant Theory conversation. Great way to ease the somber mood. Also, good luck with the firefly catching. |
Guest chapter 52 . 6/23 Love the focus on Uraraka's character development and the new tension surrounding UA. Can't wait to see what will happen with the school festival being cancelled. |