this story went from interesting to bad very quickly. the whole evil cliche bad guys in the background at the end of a chapter for a cliff hanger is over done. If this is any indication of future chapters I am done with the story. It might have been tolerable with just giovanni, but then you add another one into the mix naw fam I am out.

Amazing story! Keep it up!

This story is awesome, I'm always one for stories about champs and gym leaders back in there younger days, cang wait for more!

Keep up the good work!

It seems that the only thing worse than death for Red is Blue’s wrath at finding out about his toasted car.

More chapter please! Update it fast! Ignore your other stories for this! Just kidding but still you better update faster :)))

This is amazing.
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Already a much darker version of a Pokemon world that sees a team Rocket a lot more organized and stronger than anything I've read from any other fiction as of late, the fact that they have Pokemon not exclusively limited to the region also makes it more interesting. Can't wait for the update. Keep up the great work.