your story is AMAZING ...can you belive that I read the first 20 chapters in less than three days ! .. it's so addictive I even left all my other activities just to read it .. but now I am a bit sad because I'll have to wait for next chapters .. so don't make me wait .. do it as fast as you can (kidding .. take your time XD.

I was wondering if tanjiro will create his own style like nezuko (chihime) did .. or will he learn another breathing style .. or maybe he'll stay just like he is ?!

i kinda found chihime is a little OP .. don't you think ?! .. like she has the breath of the moon , blood moon and her demon blood art .. other than the features of a demon body .

And I am really excited to know how will you play the next meeting between tanjiro and nezukotanjiro and gyuu (not sure if that's how his name is written)

anyway ... I have said alot .. so keep going and never let the idea of stopping this fiction cross your mind .. your fans will kill you XD

I'm surprised on how fast you udated this chapter. Or perhaps you wrote this in advance?

Either way, I'm impressed on this chapter! Your writing skills got a lot better and the way you plan the fights is brilliant

Yushiro do be Simp

aha yes author this is the good shit

This chapter is:
"24" by Not Waving
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Alright I can’t wait for fight with Tanjirou and lower moon 1

Is he actually gonna take a lower moon solo again?! i'm hyped as fuck.

Nice chapter!

I wanted it noted that you played me so hard with the scene when Kanao ask Aoi what is the word for longing for someone you miss and want to be near. Your answer was Shinobu. I died so hard of laughter when I thought Aoi would assume it was Tanjirou, but instead assume it was Shinobu. Great chapter once again!

I knew the character development chapter you were setting up for would be great. Super happy to see it executed perfectly. Though I can't wait to see Zenitsu's development.

I really love how you performed a different take to cannon especially with murata's death. I believe without a doubt that this will lead to huge leap in character development for our demon slayers. Great work!

I just wanted to say, you say “would” a lot in the actions of characters, but that indicates the future and it’s a little awkward...
Hope I helped

Great update and nice bonding moments for Aoi in this chapter as she got Zenitsu to open up more and see himself developing into a capable fighter despite his wounds. Great moment between Aoi and Kanao too showcases a sisterhood bond between them in a sense.

Kanao slowly developing feelings for Tanjiro and it makes one wonder what would happen if she tries to help Tanjiro save Nezuko ?

Overall nice update. Keep up your fantastic story.

Nice chapter, I wonder if you will follow the anime for Tanjiro opponent ( arrow demon and ball demon at tamayo home) cause they clearly already outmached by him at this point.
And i love your nezuko version. I hope we will see more of her pov.

So you decided to go with meeting Tamayo after all... Well I am kind of confused. In canon even when you are a demon and you kill somebody u still end in hell... I never really understood that cuz you are a completly different person. I am just wondering if Nezuko will be able to life with herself when she will turn back to being a human(after all people she killed). But it's a really interesing development, I am hoping for more

New chapter! great!
I'm really ashamed of what you say, I say it is the first time that I comment the same story this long on different platforms. It's that you write super cool. How I wish I had that narrative like you have.
Now with the chapter!

-Zenitsu and his depression. I was quite surprised that it was Inosuke who motivated him and not Tanjiro (Although he did it ... little but he did it), that dictates the maturing process in Hashibara ... dammit! The talk with Uzui did work. It's good that he started training regardless of the limitation that he now suffers. I like the interactions with Aoi though, it's rare to see this shipp crack when I ship Inosuke x Aoi. Maybe this time I will make an exception.

-I already said about Inosuke but I insist, see him mature ... wow

-With Tanjiro, pos ... Kagaya's conversation was interesting. Although Kagaya is a careful and cautious man, sending Kamado to watch is a low but required blow. Asakusa is coming as well as Tamayo and Yushiro, I have to see what are the factors that differentiate your story with the anime / manga canon, I look forward to reading it!

That would be it, I was going to send my review yesterday but I had to finish publishing the final chapter of Curse Blood (My Kimetsu no Yaiba fanfic)
See you! I hope you're well and safe from all this madness of the pandemic!