Ooooh boy.

I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Yah.

Dang I forgot how much I dislike greasy Gideon.

... Goddamnit I KNOW at some point some poor creature decides to stick it in the pain hole.

Good wholesome twin vibes

Love pugilist fics, also the texting segment to get through the side scenarios were great lol

Was kinda hoping for an update, but this information is good too

I've been thinking about looking into a patreon, so if I do get one, I'll look ya up. Though, I must say my fingers are crossed that you haven't cancelled this story (as nowhere in this chapter do you specifically say that).

Oh, no. Wendip or Dipcifica? What do I pick?

when i saw 56 words i expected this to say you cancelled it

WHY DID THE MASON-WENDY MESSAGES MAKE ME LAUGH SO MUCH

reading the description, i was intrigued at the prospect of a more physically capable dipper. i was also more interested on how you would change mabel in reaction to a pugilist twin. I was sad to see that you would just throw her into the "damsel in distress" corner, showing a lack of respect for the character. Maybe she could have an affinity with magic and or in contrast with dipper she's smart, but no. You just had to have dipper(Gary Stu, your self insert character) have the brains and the brawns. You could've maybe tried to make it so that both of the twins are smart and tough but have flaws(over confident, prone to tunnel vision, etc).

Back to the prospect of dipper being more of a fighter. I was disappointed at how you handled the whole thing. Giving dipper some kind of dues ex machina power up to level the playing field, it really makes it BORING since we already know that every antagonist is just going to get their ass handed to them due to some magic ass pull bullshit. Every monster confrontation was boring and anticlimactic. You could have changed the plot of the show, instead you change it in the most shallow way possible. The changes doesn't seem to matter in the long run, only to feed the narrative of dipper being the big dick manly casanova that gets the girl while kicking ass. You could've made so that the twins would need to use each other's strength to overcome their weaknesses, you didn't though.

The way you handled the mystery part of the show was really bad. You keep making dipper have this epiphanies that just see right through the show's mystery. What's the point.

Also journal 3 is an encyclopedic collection of information on the variety of paranormal and supernatural creatures living in Gravity Falls why would it have spells for eyesight? Shouldn't that be in journal 2?

The idea was intriguing, your execution(the way you go about things) was lacking.

MAN MAN MAN MAN MAN! GAAAAINNNNNS! It’s pretty dope that Dipper got to keep his gains though

Yeah nah lad, you better gimme an update before i eat your goddamn earlobes

Man! You are good not only you put on a spin on the episodes, you change outcome and events that come before and after. You did a great job, I hope that you continue this. Please~~~!

Fucking love this story. Fills up my quota for Mary Sue plus blood and a hint of angst

I really liked this one. Ya did a good job at showing how Wendy could go from cool to freaked very easily. They way you had the time machine set up, even utilizing the black eye in a completely different way was GREAT.

I really liked the end, where Mason was about ready to tear into Wendy...until she revealed WHY she had done it, and their stances were instantly reversed XD Though, I must say that it REALLY must suck for Wendy, losing a great guy to the blonde rich girl who always gets what she wants (and because of that, I will say that, if you do it, I have a feeling I know how this story's "Fight Fighters" is gonna go).

Also, minor thing, but unless someone is legit trying to do an OOC type story, then regardless of the AU, Robbie will always be Robbie...and I absolutely LOVED how Wendy rejected him without mercy!

Keep up the good work