Reviews for Perfection in Imperfection
Gamera68 chapter 1 . 7/8
Please continue this wonderful one-shot where she has their baby girl!

This was so cute and perfect!
narusakufan1985 chapter 1 . 11/21/2019
That was such a sweet story. Keep up the good work. Naofumi and Raphtalia forever.
Ame de asobu neko chapter 1 . 11/17/2019
Awwww, so nice and fluffy! And the part about the crib - absolutely hilarious! Good job!
Proxy4818 chapter 1 . 11/16/2019
Thanks for the heartwarming read
AnimexFreakz 0.o chapter 1 . 11/16/2019
Cute story, thanks for writing! I had my father and husband put the crib together for my daughter, it was a task I was not willing to tackle pregnant, LOL!
-kitty
Crystal-Fullbuster-Lockser chapter 1 . 11/15/2019
It was really nice to work with you, this one-shot warms my heart even if I had read it like 5 times already lol

Thank you for your suggestion ! I loved that idea and i had fun drawing that art

- MaLockser ~
E2Moto chapter 1 . 11/15/2019
Aww, I love this story. Great writing.
bp136714 chapter 1 . 11/15/2019
The funny thing is when I was 14, I helped put a crib together & it worked the first time. Instructions are wonderful things.
AaZeref chapter 1 . 11/14/2019
really good
drmcgraw186 chapter 1 . 11/14/2019
Wholesome
ItzABlueWulf chapter 1 . 11/14/2019
Woah Allen, straight to the strong stuff i see, prepare to get mobbed by people!

Jokes aside, fluffy story to match the fluffy feelings it gave me, good stuff. And something tells me that crib was an Ikea model, damn things require a PhD to be put together.
yatorivevo chapter 1 . 11/14/2019
Aww so cute, Allen. Amazing collab, you two! 3 Loved it.