Took me a while to get around to reading this story and, sorry to say, I'm not going to be able to finish it. What they did is too much like rape, for me to be able to stomach. Right now, I want every single member in that brothel to die a painful and bloody death. Sorry, rape in any story is something I can't stand, and usually has me thinking of bloody ways to brochure those monsters, in short stories of my own. So, this is going to be the one Harry Potter story you have written, that I can't like and will be unable to finish. Sorry, I hope you continue writing and that this isn't too rude, I just can't stand what they did.

Oh for Lords sake...

Him and he'd dammit. He's a guy not a gal.

You say you decided not to use a fem Harry but them do it anyway with no warning. If you want to write slash story, just do so and lablel it as such. Sorry but saying Harry is now a girl doesn't make it any less slash.

Harry seems to be settling in. Looking forwards to seeing where this goes next.

She just ended the Potter line!

OK, can't read this. Harry is both a she and a he?!

I didn't like the death of Harry. I see it as a death of his personality and history. You replaced him with someone who's whole personality is based on someone else with no consent or input from Harry. I like your writing style and stories but I was disappointed with this one because it seems like Harry himself died.

The identity death thing is really kind of horrifying. I'm kind of hoping that Harry/Jodie at least gets back at her for this.

Wow, Linda but not quite saw that coming.

Great chapter! I didn't see this happening since you wanted Harry to be a boy instead of a girl, what a nice twist to the story. Harry is now Jodie, a curvy D-cup breasted slut with a big frim ass who loves cock like an alcoholic loves his drink! I like how she will now be friends with Parvati and Lavender, that will bring a much needed level of normality for the now busty brunette. I'm looking forward to reading how that group will mesh together, she be better friends with those two than she was when she was a boy and with the pig Weasel and Granger. I hope she does take her studying seriously I like reading about a FemHarry! that is intelligent, cunning and knows how to have a good time! Hopefully there will be lemons in the next chapter, will there also be some girl on girl scenes with Jodie, whether it's with Brown, Patil or any other girl like Bones and Abbot? It would be great if there was and added a magical twist to it. Like in other stories there's a powder a girl or boy could add to milk and drink which would make there cum taste like vanilla. A dildo that can stick to a girls clit that was enchanted to feel like she actually had a dick and could channel her girl cum through it to release inside there partner. You could add a Transfiguration spell that temporarily allows a girl to Transfigure there pussy to a dick and balls. I'm sure Jodie would come to love a spell like that and I'd bet Lavender and Parvati would love to put it to use and help there dear friend scratch the itch hint, hint. Hopefully Jodie and Patricia will be able to mess with Dumbledork and his useless order of fried chicken real good and Jodie will be able to branch out and make more friends and allies. I like to see her have moments and enjoying her life, she's a rich teen girl and a powerful witch, let her have a taste of the lifestyle. Have her take Brown and Patil on shopping trips and buy bags,, heels, dresses, make up etc that's high end designer brands like Louis Vuitton, Givenchy, Gucci, Prada etc. There's bound to be a Wizarding worlds version of those high end brands available in London, have her hit up those stores and ride around London in a Ferrari or Bentley and enjoy her family fortune. Let her go clubbing with her friends and get laid and even have the girl own her own nightclub and even her own strip club that she could even work in, now that would be great! Hopefully Patricia can teach her Occlumency and Legilimency, she will definitely need those skills in the future. What she should do most of all is get herself Two custom made wands, they would work way better for her than her damn Ollivander wand that I bet Dumbles had Ollivander to something to weaken that damn wand of hers to further hinder Jodie, she should snap that damn Holly wand. With her having two wands she could begin practicing and mastering duo casting to help give her more of an edge and the spare would also act as a back up wand and the Ministry Trace wouldn't be put on it so she could use magic outside of school. She would also need to hone her duelling skills and I reckon learn dark curses that can kill, if she wants a future she needs to be willing to kill for it because she sure as hell won't receive any mercy from Voldemort and his marry band of inbreds, nor from Dumbledore and the useless order of fried chicken. Brilliant story you have here, can't wait to read more of this story and see where it goes so update soon!

What's the point of male Harry if you are going to change entire backstory of the MC using a platform?

BTW that platform is insanely OP and what does madam use it for? For making prostitutes. Very high quality but prostitutes all the same.

The first and second chapter was intresting, but the third... Gender bender... Disgusting
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This is a really interesting idea. Looking forwards to seeing where you take this.

I don't like the way this story is becoming.