Is this just gonna be a one-shot? Because I really wanna know where it goes from here. It had a great first chapter.

Great Fic

This "ha" kiddo.

You do realize that what you're saying is actually illegal?
Parcasious cannot just simply put his chapters behind a paywall. That's actually illegal since he doesn't own either series and is just writing fanfiction.

Either way, this story is interesting and is more interesting than some of the Shirou stories. Huntsman of Red V2, Tale of Two, Fate Alternate, and Fate: Kill are less interesting than this story.

I daresay that Parcasious could just have a hobby of writing this story whenever bored and it'd still be a good story.

I look forward to future chapters, I really do.
Sadly, with the poor reception received by people who don't seem to like new stories, it possibly won't happen.

A shame.

I like it , will you update it ?

Can you all shut the fuck up? It’s gets really annoying to see people argue? And ruins everyone’s interest when they end up getting dragged from your pettiness.

So easy for people to say how selfish some of us are to tell the author to continue this.

Easy because I bet the lot of who are saying the author should write whatever he wants because it's his story and all that. But I bet those are the ones not paying the author.

Who do think helps the author to continue to write? THE ONES WHO ACTUALLY PAYING.

Those who are defending this fic and not donating to the author should keep their mouth shut.

If the ones who are paying are saying they don't want this fic to continue then they have the right to say that. Because without them we would not get updates do you get what I'm saying?

Those who pay have a say. Those who are reading this for free and not donating to the author don't.

Simple as that

Fuck all of you guys for telling the author to not write a story he made. I cannot believe how selfish you can be not to allow Parcasious to do a story that isn’t about Emiya Shirou.

Ignore the haters. You’re the one who’s allowed to continue this story. Anyone who tells you otherwise, should go back to their mother’s and make them give birth to them again. Freaking Natures mistakes.

Fuck anyone who tells you to continue this fic. It’s your story but we always donate to patreon to influence your decision(we always choose to NOT continue this fic). All those who said you should continue should go fuck themselves. Donate first to patreon before your open your mouth

One of the ring of Solomon?

Fuck anyone who tells you to stop. It’s your story your allowed to continue it. All those who said you should stop should go fuck themselves.

To V Trigger I can see where you stand but...

Yeah this is Fanfiction, but it's Fanfiction that people are paying for. But some OF US are paying this author to write these stories that he or she is making a profit of other people's hard work.

And some us wouldn't or shouldn't complain if the author wasn't asking for money to write the stories.

So here's the point of view of SOME of the paying customers for these stories.

He or she have a lot of unfinished stories

Always fond of cliffhangers IN EVERY FRICKIN CHAPTER

Always using grand suspense that's it's getting dull

He or she don't have a steady schedule, they uses votes to see what they should write/post next so some stories are not updated for MONTHS and the story that hasn't been updated for a while is left with an irritating unsatisfying cliffhanger with no progression to the story, and speaking of that.

And despite the word count, nothing really happens so you see hardly any progress in a chapter, the author can write 6k chapter scene with two characters JUST TALKING in a room with no progression in the story at all

And the author never address these concerns when we express this, cause why should they, he or she is making money to care about constructive criticism.

So... some of us feel like we're not getting what our moneys worth

Or at least that's for me, I of course CAN'T speak for others

And I don't care if I'm using a "guest" to write this review to hide my account, cause last time I did use my account that I used to express myself ai gotten messages from not the other but other readers harassing me why I am "wrong" but I bet half of them are not even paying the author when they sent the messages ugh

This is interesting. I think it has a lot of potential

I've been a long time follower, or at least I think I can claim to be since I've been an avid reader of yours since even before the Hell chapters in Holy Man even started. But since then whenever I want to read some good'ol Shirou wank or some Artoria love I go to you.

But even I have to say that this entire bullshit happening with the reviews, telling you to discontinue this simply because they don't like Vali and think he's boring?

That's what fanfictions are for you uneducated twats.

Parcasious is one of the best authors when it comes to simple concepts turning into a good story, and this 10k word chapter got me interested to see where and how far he can manage to take Vali's character and turn it into something more likeable and appreciated.

Cause let's face it, most of you dunces didn't really think Shirou is a deep character to begin with until you've read one of Parcasious' stories.

And even then nothing's changed in Shirou's character. He's still a suicidal dumbass that doesn't care about his own life for the sake of others. But Par twisted that character into its head and found loopholes to address Shirou's broken mindset and turned it into good stories i.e Fate in-Time, Holy Man. Where he finally discovers something other than just saving others.

Just believe in Par that he can make this fic good. Believe in Par to make Vali a great character.

He did well with Shirou, I want to see him do well with others too but you guys aren't giving him a chance.

good