I’m dying inside just cause i feel i need more but my body want me to do something else

It was very difficult to differentialize between when you switched to Jeanne and Emiya because you kept using 1st person perspective without any warnings at all. Since this story is complete, and you're likely not going to edit anything, this Review is probably going to fall on deaf ears, but I should point this out none the less.

Perspective-switch between characters should always, always be warned to the readers.

Gloria a ti y a tus historias amigo
Mis palabras de alabanza son insuficientes para elogiar tu trabajo, mira que tú has completado más de 3 historias en menos de un año eres el ejemplo a seguir de los escritores de fanfiction, no tienes idea de las historias que me han fascinado no han pasado del capítulo 5,en cambio tú nos has entregado no sólo una sino tres maravillosas historias de una calidad impresionante en menos de un año
Así que mis más sinceras gracias, gracias por todo lo que nos has dado, tú te mereces más de Los seguidores y favoritos que ya tienes muchos más.. bueno es hora de despedirme e ir a leer tu siguiente historia. Hasta entonces. XD

Vamos por la victoria, AAAAAAAAA.

Por fin alguien que le da una muerte feliz a la pequeña Loli, mi corazón ha sanado un poco XD

Bueno, iniciemos con otra maravillosa historia. XD

Thank you for this awesome story!

Now a question - How did Shakespeare able to peered through EMIYA's past when he supposed to only warped Archer illusion story to Jeanne?
Also I like this guy enthusiast even towards the end xD
Jeanne making her first love to Archer makes sense than Sieg.
This guys always left the girls behind him after he fulfilled his purpose. Dammit.

First, I want to congratulate for the completion of fanfiction. This is a good fanfiction and for the romantic part I think it's OK. And finally I can't wait for the KoF story.

Pls next story. I'm waiting to read it singularity Eternal madness empire with king of fakers

I do like the pairing, in my morbid sense of humor they fit pretty well. the King of Fakers Finn was born in fire and Jeanne D'arc dies in it.

Jokes aside I do think someone as selfless as Finn more than qualify for that Saint Virginity. Finn thought he didn't deserve love and Jeanne thought she could never love another individually romantically due to her duties as a Saint. It makes sense that they're compatible so to speak.

Though I thought Nero would have been a love interest due to his changing Nero's final moments in your first story.

Your writing is getting better but grammar though. Then again my grammar sucks ass an im American.

Kinda wished you'll do Camelot before Babylon but eh

I take offense to that 'you certainly didn't expect', I'll have you know i predicted this from when you first introduced Nero during King of Fakers: saving them all and i even wrote about it in my review at the end of the story xD

thanks for the story

HOHOHO... I cant wait for the next story to come up and its making me hype up a lot xD

Excellent job with the story

I really liked your story, it was entertaining, and with respect to romance, I will always be faithful to Siegx Jeanne but I liked it, I recognize that, like the fight of the King of the Fakers and Shirou, I will wait for your next story