Oh, how well done, Rape wish fulfillment! If you enjoy rape this is the doc for you!

This is making me want to take the Essence Meta CYOA(specifically for a downgraded Elementalist Essence and primarily for the Dragon Essence) solely so I can do my own Draconian story. On the one hand, Elementalist would let me choose any number of the four elements(Earth/Water/Wind/Fire) to harness, generate, or turn into with chances of secondary elements developing. On the other hand, Dragon based around an element(and its subsequent elements), with the ability to grant others dragon traits via feeding them your blood/breeding, potentially turning those with dragon traits into dragons themselves if they live long enough and are exposed to enough dragon blood. Yeah, I'm gonna just go and use the Dragon Essence(just checked, can gain secondary abilities/powers depending on how you design the dragon. So you could, theoretically, create a djinn-dragon for wish granting or magical dragon via choosing a dragon type like eastern dragons), your story is just causing me all kinds of ideas to pop up.

I am kinda sad we haven't seen Alan collect anymore women, despite his insinuations about Sundancer or Purity. I am slightly annoyed at the fact that several times, throughout the story, you have openly contemplated various parts of the story but have derailed via lemons.

I prefer Tin Tyrant myself when thinking of Kaiser. Are you using Worm CYOA v3 or just altering Lung's power how you see fit? I am curious because it would be possible to do the same from the CYOA formula, though I would expect a second potentially a second power even if it wasn't flashy in nature. Dragons are always stealing maidens, so I can see where Wyrm/Alan would wind up gathering women from either defeated opponents or as tribute.

I do find it hilarious that Lung, who is Asian/Japanese, turns into a more Westernized version of a Dragon while Alan who is British turns into a more Eastern style Dragon.

Very good, loved

Ok, that seems stupid. He is going to force some woman into being his wife and out of everyone in the city he decides he wants to marry skinny and undeveloped 15 year old Taylor Hebert with no experience or personality to speak of at this point? So, it's a pedophile rape fic?

I'm not even talking about the teenager thing but his complete, apparent lack of taste is my point.

Awesome chapter

Hmmmm nice

Thanks for the awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one

great chapter.

Interesting take. I think a few times that you left out a few words and you seem to either be ignoring or have forgotten the Undersiders. I just wish that the chapters were a little longer and that Skitter and Tattletale had a bigger parts that barefoot and preggers...

Well, Wyrm can crush the Merchants and add Squealer to his harem, her tinkering would be very useful.

i hope we get some Blackops soldier action now instead of Wyrm curbsomping them. Whats the point in training guys when you dont use them :D

Interesting scene and chapter!

Welp
One less gang in the bay i guess

Ohhhh shit, welp RIP the merchants lol.
Thanks for the chapter!