ok... so this is my first jack x oc fanfic... and I love it... I want to know what happens next and I hope this isn't a dead story...

Well that's one hell of a cliffhanger to leave it on! God I love handsome Jack! I'm really interested to see where you take the rest of this story! Update soon!

I loved your first version, but I gotta say this re-write is even better! The effort is obvious and I am definitely enjoying Sera's personality :)

Thank you for the update!

Hello there! I'm so stoked to see that you're re-writing this story in 3rd person! I generally can't stand reading 2nd person (or about characters with Y/N cuz I just read "yn" not my name haha) but! I have read the original story, your concept was so intriguing I had to!
Anyway haha I just wanted to let you know that 20 paragraphs from the bottom of chapter two it still says "your return" instead of "her return"...
I love your work! Hope everything in your life is going well

I'm so excited to read this again! Also, you forgot to replace one of the "Y/N" in the following paragraph:

Setting her mug down, she rolled her eyes and leveled them at Sera like she had to break sad news to a naive child.Y/N], word gets 'round. Jack's gonna wipe us all out, if he gets his way. To him, we're all bandit scum."

Just wanted to let you know! I can't wait for the next chapter!