Oh wow! That was just so many levels of creepy and wonderful.

Forgive me for not going into detail, I'm kind of lost for words at the moment. Finding fan fiction that gets really creative while still being in character like this tends to be somewhat rare.

Uu~w, creepy ending. :3 Loved it.

That's one thing I've noticed, too - despite the fact that you're not writing true "horror", you have a real knack for it. When you want your reader scared and/or horrified, you make it so. Starscream being trapped in a mind-prison for vorns is a good example. I know there were a few others, but I can't remember at the moment...

And now we've got Terrorsaur with his nightmares - the first one gave me chills - and then there was the scene at the very end.

I'd love to see what'd happen if you put your mind to writing a true horror-fic. Then again, I may get my chance, as you've marked "Reflections of Life in the City of Art" as Drama/Horror.

I'm reading your stuff in the "correct" order now, though, so first I'm gonna read "Potential". lol

It got smart enough to wonder why it had to take orders.

that was interesting. I liked it a lot.

That was absolutely incredible. Superbly written and just unbelievably well-characterised. You gave a really original and fascinating backstory to a complex and interesting character. I I *love* your portrayal of Terrorsaur and Waspinator, I really care about these two characters despite only having encountered them in your fanfiction and never having seen Beast Wars for myself. And in a way I don't ever want to see the show, as I doubt it could live up to the amazing way you've portrayed these characters.

You've done the impossible- you've made Terrorsaur into a three-dimensional and sympathetic character whilst still keeping him recognisable as the git from Season 1. Now _that_ is class.

And the whole thing of him being able to escape via beast mode was great. Who saw that coming?

This is the best fan fiction I've ever read, period. I am in complete awe of how great this is. You're bloody brilliant and I just had to let you know how much I enjoyed this. I laughed, I tensed up, I was totally spellbound

My, that was VERY good. Very impressive; Terrorsaur is not a popular Pred, much less a bot, in Beast Wars. The past you granted him and his relationship with Waspinator is all very suiting, and very fitting, and very ORIGINAL! I'm mighty impressed, and I seriously hope to see more of your works come out soon. I absolutely adore this story!

What, no reviews for this?

I love your Terrorsoar, as I love most of your characterizations. And Armature is one chilling mech-quite like some of the artists I've known, in fact-and he makes me think vaguely of Josef Mengele. Heh.