Reviews for Closer to a Home
Mari Wollsch chapter 7 . 6/21
super! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Jostanos chapter 7 . 6/19
I am glad that Harry/Hamato was able to not only get everything situtated, but was also able to go home, and later harmonize with Ron and Hermione!

If there happens to be a sequel (and I doubt it. :P) what may happen next?
canadamathewwilliams chapter 7 . 6/18
Thank you for this great ending, I loved the story and how it developed.
Shikaru Hibari chapter 7 . 6/18
Thank you for the update~
ragnarshadow chapter 7 . 6/18
This is a good story and im happy to see the end . The social media storm of jkr it would be for long.

Good luck on your next proyects
jgood27 chapter 6 . 5/28
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 2/28
at least now the Horcrux is out of him and hopefully he will be trained in both his magic and flames.
Shikaru Hibari chapter 6 . 2/18
Please,please save Hanato!Ohmygosh...poor Hanato/Harry!He's suffering so badly and horribly!Why?!Please get to him as soon as possible!
UnorthodoxDreamer chapter 6 . 2/13
brooooooo

Broooooooooooo

BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

HOLY FUCK THIS IS SUCH A COOL WRITING STYLE HELL YO I COULDNT PUT IT DOWN AND I TRIED! Oh my god I’m practically giddy with the pent up tension from that cliffhanger! I’m shaking my dude! Shaking! Fucking hell, if it’s a mix of memory charms and most flames I’m really curious about who it could be!

Honestly, at first, I was so put off with the sudden change in direction from the first to second chapters I almost stopped reading but I was like “this is so bizarre what’s actually happening I’m so lost” and I’m insatiably curious so I kept reading and then BOMBSHELL AFTER BOMBSHELL HOLY HELL!

And I have so many questions! Did the person who did this really die in the DOM? What happened to Hana that made him lose his flames? Did this really all come from Voldemort’s side? Is there a third interested party that we don’t know about? Who is that powerful of a mist and/or wizard? Why did Voldypants insist on both Nev AND Hana being there? I mean, prophecy be damned right? No one has made mention of Hana having the lightning bolt scar so he wasn’t “marked” right? I. I need answers!

For real though, this is insanely good and such a creative writing style. It’s definitely not something that works well often but boy did you make it work and work HARD! Your pacing is just so that I’m getting enough clues to the mystery to stay interested, while being able to build an attachment to Hana as a different character from Harry and even when we think we’re gonna get answers you just flip flop povs on us and suddenly the answer is right there but we can’t see it and ugh I love this so much. Too much.

Okay, I’m gonna stop babbling now. I look forward to the next chapter (also, don’t answer any of my questions in a pm, I want the suspense to literally kill me)
Jostanos chapter 6 . 1/26
Magical UK, Thou hast Tickled a Sleeping Dragon by not only kidnapping an adopted son, but also altering the minds of both said adopted son, his parents, and, some how, the community at large!

You will feel the Dragon's wrath soon enough!
sweet magic gal chapter 6 . 1/21
Now that we know that Harry actually is Hanato, I'm super hyped to see how this is all going to go down!
Jewelie-chan chapter 1 . 1/20
Wow. I almost feel like this world, this story you've created is something real, something tangible. The characters seem so flawed and so damn human that I'm honestly having trouble coming up with words describing how amazingly captivating I find this story. And I can be pretty verbose, especially about the things I enjoy. And I very much enjoy this. It's made me cry, and feel like I need to see this through to the end of this. I feel like I'm being pulled along with the characters. The breathless horror brought with the realization for each character that most everyone had forgotten him. I felt it in my chest. I love the reality you've imagined and shaped. I hope to read more soon. Thank you for sharing your creation with us, and have a wonderful day. Dftba :)
ragnarshadow chapter 6 . 1/19
Raku its the main character of nisekoi?
demonix19 chapter 6 . 1/18
Well snap! Things are going to come to a head in the next couple of chapters. This is going to be sooooo epic! I can't wait!
fireclaw239 chapter 1 . 1/17
I think you should rewrite this story now, before it gets too long, because right now, all you're doing is confusing everyone. also, a flashback should never last 3 full chapters. at that point you're better off either writing a prequel story, or just telling the story in order and skipping the flashback altogether. as of right now, all you have is one prologue chapter and three flashback chapters
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