| Reviews for Remnants of Magic |
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   Ada1229 chapter 7 . 8/10 Tbh i was enjoying rhis story. Sure rheres the glaring issue about the ACTUAL tale of the 4 maidens but otherwise i was liking this story. If rhere was another rhing that bothered me ir was Harry's previous age. You made it seem like he was still somewhat young at the start of the story even tho chronologically you indicated he was older then Dumbledore had been when he died (Susan Bones' great grandaughter was the indicator). Wouldn't his lack of aging have already indicated to him that the Hollows did something to him? If so then why did he question Death about being called master? Otherwise im sad you abandoned this story |
| drkprince chapter 2 . 7/8 wow...what a genius move.. wake up nd say dimensional travel genius...sheer absolute fng genius.. humanity clcks ticking...awsm |
| Draconion-V chapter 7 . 6/17 It was good while it lasted and brought me a smile. Hope you continue writing for fun |
| Iamafish chapter 6 . 5/21 Really well written. Keep it up |
| Iamafish chapter 3 . 5/21 Good stuff |
| Iamafish chapter 2 . 5/21 Loving it! |
| Iamafish chapter 1 . 5/21 Good stuff. Interesting concept so far |
| DontMindMe chapter 7 . 3/4 Shame I've with plot holes it was still a good read |
| AngelofDarkness95 chapter 7 . 3/3 I hope for you to continue but if someone does adopt can you please post the user name as a new chapter? |
| forget the rest chapter 7 . 2/26 I'm glad you decided to go back to the drawing board. The main detractor to this story is that Harry is supposedly 200 years old and has nothing to show for that. Beyond the initial sentence stating that in chapter 1 it's never brought up again. He's 200. He should be at least competent at battle magic and act in a mature manner. You have him acting like in the books where he's a teenager. I'm surprised that no one else mentioned this, especially regarding the issues pairing a 200 year man with 17 year old teenagers. This story is also kind of bland. I know you said you essentially winged it, and it really shows. A sectumsempra at a dragon, really? You're going to need to either delve deeper into Rowling's work or create stuff in your own. |
| enji-benjy chapter 7 . 2/26 pitty, I was enjoying it |
| enji-benjy chapter 6 . 2/20 Great story so far, I look forward to seeing what happens next. |
| enji-benjy chapter 1 . 2/20 'trap' might be a bit strong. |
| MrBatman123086 chapter 6 . 2/18 OOOOOOOOH how about harry's semblance being a gift from death or how about inspired inventor from the worm cyoa v1 |
| DarkFox17 chapter 6 . 2/18 Well if your able to have your aura unlocked then you should be able to get a Semblance, good story :) |
