Reviews for Hollow Child
WesternReader chapter 5 . 7/26
I don't know. People don't usually go talk about how abused they are to make others feel bad. I mean it's like guilt tripping someone because a rock fell onto them instead of you. Deathly embarrassing and shameful to express such a sentiment out loud
sasukesdoom chapter 1 . 7/9
o.o i really like this perspective on sakura and shirou. they really fit together.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/2
Why are Saber paramaeters So High if She is under Shirou?

Why are making her different if Saber served Shirou Father?.. you are contradicting Fate Zero
Ho4qin chapter 13 . 7/1
No need to be sorry for the POV i realy enjoyed the perspective of saber lilly the cheerfull kindof insanity and the reaction something that should be surprising and should raise questions with just „neat”. if you do a another pov of ana i think there should be more subtle snake stuff referances since she is, some weird combination of snake monser , godess and some humanity
TungstenCat chapter 13 . 7/1
Glad to have you back! Saber Lily’s section was a wonderful - her bright enthusiasm is both an amusing and heartbreaking contrast to her damaged allies. The understatements work very well too - Emiya’s shock at seeing her is communicated entirely in a glance and then buried away, as expected from someone so reserved. It’s been a few chapters getting here to the start of the War, and yet no time feels wasted at all. High quality all around, and thank you for it.
Takedo chapter 13 . 7/1
Yo, that was a very slow, yet fast, chapter lol.

Get all the lying out of the way and you get the truth out. Thank God for that.
Forum Explorer chapter 13 . 6/30
Saber Lily: Your entire team is in desperate need of hugs. With no exceptions.
No Face May King chapter 13 . 6/30
Archer Heracles AKA Alcides AKA The Most Bullshit Servant of Them All, the dude who has King's Order, NP which count as only one but in truth is more like twelve separate NP's, Nine Lives and if the Author feels like it Reincarnation Pandora, which can stole NP's from other servants. That's goes without speaking of his parameters or his absolute martial skill which even in a Berserker state remains well beyond even the average servant. The only way this total beast can be defeated in a Holy Grail War is by author bullshitery
Xperior chapter 13 . 6/30
EMIYA really just dropped all these bombs on them and walked out lmao
Spartan3909 chapter 13 . 6/30
Thanks for the chapter _.
downix2k chapter 13 . 6/30
Glad to have the update, and sucks about your internet. Story is shaping up and I am looking forward to more in the future.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/8
Please update soon
Guest chapter 12 . 5/26
I Hope you make A Shirou x Sakura lemon that acts as A Foil To Shinji Raping Sakura in Chapter 1

again we How Shirou and Rin Would React if She Confess amd Admit That Shinji Raped Her..

And Canon she never really opened up to others about her past.. Which is understandably very relatable and Tragic.. It hard For Rape Victims To Report Sexual Abuse...

It Would Take Someome Sakura Trust immensely to Share Her Secrets..

1: She Hardly Knows Rin. the relationship is strained.

2: Despite Budding Romance. They only began to know each other better Recently in Heaven Feels. They're certainly not best buddies that Hang Out Constantly.

3: if only someome Like Kariya Matou Was Alive.. it's tragic that he got his priorities wrong Fate Zero.. I also blame Sakura's mother Aoi.. she was just content being a submissive housewife that she failed to see the damage being done to her children.. And While Sakura and Run Father Had the best of intentions for Sakura he Failed As Father Because he was Stupid Enough To Trust Zouken with Sakura Safety. Lol.. he's a horrible judge of character.. mistake one he trusted Gilgamesh.. He Trusted His protege/Student.. Who Killed Him.

Just seems like most magus are screwed up when it comes to their morals. It's completely miracle that Rin did not Not so Immoral and not be self thoughtless.

Regardless of what route Rin always ends up Saving and helping Shiro emiya

if anything regardless it will probably take years for sakura to finally open up to Shirou about her past
guiltyr2 chapter 12 . 4/26
Lily? Well shirou is in for a hard time. You could at least gave him muramasa. I don't know, somehow
Spartan3909 chapter 12 . 4/26
Thanks for the chapter _.
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