Interesting the clashes brw Jaune and semiramis could have quite the potential

Assassin story's are rare so I like it, just hope he doesnt get nerfed like crazy cuz that would be boring.

Jaune is screwed and I can't wait to see it!

Well I will say this...I despise this story...has a amazing prologue aaaand...you ruined it, I’m checking out, you probably won’t care but this is my review

Lmao idk why, but I keep forgetting that Semiramis isn’t a Caster, but an Assassin instead. I would love to see how the dynamic will go, Jaune an honorable kid from an respectful family who happens to make a contract with the first poisoner ever. I have to agree at least he didn’t get Stheno.

I wonder who the rest of Team RWBY and JNPR got? I had a funny idea that Weiss got Hans Christian or Shakespeare, Nora gets Kintoki or Frankenstein. Ren gets Okada Izou, while Ruby would get Robin Hood because he a sneaky Hero who uses gorilla warfare tactics instead of being honorable. Blake gets Medusa not sure what form I think any form would go with Blake except Gorgon, but if she does get Gorgon some crazy shit must happen to lead to that end result. Pyrrha gets Berserker if El Dorado, just because she’s the female equivalent of male Achilles and they have to meet Achilles so he can react to the fact that Pyrrha has his name when he cross dressed in his legend, or she can be a descendent of his. Yang gets Shiki Assassin or Edmond Dantes? I don’t know why either of them, they just crossed my mind for her picks.

Well I can’t wait for what’s to come next!

I like

This made me smile, it is good to see an unusual choice for Jaune's Heroic Spirit. Semiramis is a fun character to explore and use, especially here. She gets a bad rap from being "The First Poisoner", which should play interestingly with the Arc's history as being abandoned by Jeanne D' Arc. I wonder if Assassin's have as much of a negative connotation in Remnant as they do in modern society. Either way good chapter, looking forward to the next one.

consider me surprised, I would have thought you would have picked Jeanne or Gilgamesh but that was one big curveball, Semiramis!?
don't get me wrong, I love the Babylon Queen but I really didn't expect for Jaune to get a contract from the 4 horsemens, I would have thought he would get a contract from one of the knight classes

Not sure if I should feel happy pends for Jaune. A real problem.

Ruby - Lancer Medusa Lily: have petrifying eyes and scythes
OR Ruby - Rider Medusa

Jaune - Nero: Jaune's sword belonged to Julias Ceaser who was Nero's ancestor
OR Jaune - Avenger/Ruler Jeanne: obvious
OR Jaune - Gawain: look alike

Weiss - Caster Anastasia: look alike and use ice

Nora - Lancer Bryhlinder: Norse roots and obsess over a single guy
OR Nora - Berserker Frankenstein: use lightning and are destructive

Blake - Archer Atalanta: cat girls

Pyrrha - Rider Achilles: Pyrrha is Achilles name when acted as a girl
OR Pyrrha - Boudica: look alike and considered Goddess/Queen of Victory
OR Pyrrha - Chiron: teacher of Achilles

Yang - Saber Mordred: hot headed and have issues with parental neglect

Ren - Assassin Yan Qing: martial artists

Sun - Caster Xuanzhang: was the teacher of Sun Wukong

Neptune - Lancer Cu: blue haired spear wielders

Ozpin - Caster Merlin: cryptic wizards

Goodwitch - Caster Medea: good witch, bad witch

James - Rider Iskander: leader of armies

Lionheart - Caster Edison: lions

Cinder - Assassin Semiramis: ruthless queens

Salem - Foreigner Abigail: was part of Salem Witch Trials

Adam - Berserker Spartacus: overthrow oppressors

Penny - Berserker Fran OR Assasin Danzo: robot girls

Winter - Saber Chevalier: loyal and fencers

Tyrian - Caster Gilles

Watts - Caster Avicebron: act from a distance

Hazel - Berserker Hercules: rampaging monsters

Roman - Archer Robin Hood: charming thieves

Emerald - Assassin Jack: just want a mommy

Mercury - Assassin Sasaki: killers ordered by witches

Neo - Assassin Carmilla: love to torture

Great chapter, yeah I kinda felt like Jaune was either going to get a Heroic Spirit in this chapter or the next. How will Jaune get out of this problem? I mean if he calms down just a little he can start healing himself. I wonder who’ll he get maybe Irisviel (Holy Grail) because he can heal or maybe Robin Hood because his parkour skills, or possibly an Assassin I’ve been getting Grandpa Hassan vibes or maybe another Grand Servant or Servant we hardly see in crossovers like these.

10k in three chapters inst anything good bro, people will lose interest with such short updates. Otherwise the story has a really good premise

Very interesting. Yet, I'm confused by how the boy even ended up in this position. Sleepwalking or something? Because whatever happened to him, clearly it affected him in a state where he didn't even realize his position.

I am really liking the pacing here, so it is pretty good. You are handling Jaune well and are taking incredible care with both halves of the cross over. Keep up the great work, I am excited to see what you do next with the story.

I think the chapter was good. It also occurred to me that it would make sense for Adam to be the protege of Hijikata Toshizo, since they fight kind of similarly.