I love this story don’t give up on it!

So glad you updated!I'm this mystery! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I like this chapter. A LOT. It increased my anxiety for the characters and made events seem more real. Can't wait for the next update!

Where is this story going? I have no idea what's coming next and that keeps me interested!
Is Jackie coming back? Seems weird that she is still gone, group dynamics.

After a woman is raped she is emotionally and mentally traumatized. Generally she suffers from PTSD, sometimes for her entire life.
These are glaring errors to have Donna act so unaffected, Red and Kitty not to notice she has been beaten, and Forman's lack of contrition and guilt (very common feelings for romantic partners to feel) especially since what happened to her is a direct result of his vigilantism.

You KNOW I love this story. I am a firm believer in constructive criticism.

I hope you feel better and your finals go well.

I look forward to the next update.

That chapter was great! Thank you!
Poor Donna! That is horrible! Eric is kind of a bad ass! Will anyone else learn his secret?

Good luck on your finals!

What! Omg! This is just getting better and better! How did they figure out it was Eric?

This story is every comic book lover's dream come true! I read it to my husband, he's really enjoying it too!

Love the story. Sorry you're sick. I hope you feel better soon!

Loving how this story is coming along.

This is so interesting and I can't wait to see how it comes along.

Wow I really like this story's premise and beginning. Can't wait for more!