Reviews for The Titan Of Jump
Jack Redhawke chapter 4 . 6/10
Really surprised by this flash forward, like your really taking ‘how long is forever’ and running away with it
Jack Redhawke chapter 3 . 6/10
I really like this so far
rainfallMyth chapter 4 . 5/18
Dang I'm loving this future arc. Please keep writing it!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/7
Yeah the defense of the "Parole" you gave seems like an excuse to me just so you can make Robin look like a total A-hole. It would have been better if you never included that and just had Raven give him a T-communicator at the end of the chapter while the rest of the chapter from the first half being a flash back from Junior's view.

Oh jumping into the future just to skip develpoment doesn't help at all. Makes it look like you didn't want to put in effort and just do the lazy info dump like many people do. :
Guest chapter 5 . 4/17
Amazing story, read the entire thing at once. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon!
Vigriff chapter 5 . 4/11
*Plays Only A Chilling Elegy*
Guest chapter 5 . 4/11
Thank you for the update. I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please make a happy ending. Make junior and raven get married and have children please.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/9
Can you make jr have like hero custom, or at least mask, that of taskmaster from the new movie of black widow, so he will not only have a mask but also sunglasses/lenses? Please tell me yes. It suits him that custom and, mostly, mask. Please update soon. I love this story
Guest chapter 4 . 4/9
Thank you for the update. I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please make a happy ending. Make junior and raven get married and have children please.
Darraiter chapter 2 . 3/5
I like where this is going, but there are a few things I didn't get, or though they sounded a little forced.

First, is the fact that no one agrees with Robin about Junior being a villain. For what I understand, he committed crimes while in Gotham, and I assume he never were caught. Therefore, he never paid for his crimes, meaning he technically is still a criminal, no matter what he does now in Jump City.

Also, and I've got to say this as I'm Spanish myself, Junior sounds and looks more Latino than spanish. Not that it's a bad thing, considering that Bane isn't Spanish either.
SirIke5 chapter 3 . 2/8
Just when I was about to get intrested in the next chapter, it ended up being ruin. I mean, did Junior won or not because I can not tell since at the beginning of the chapter it made it sounds like he lost but when reading how the fight went it only made it all the more confusing on whether or not he won. Honestly, the whole parole bullshit does not make any sense what so ever if Junior had indeed won.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/2
Can you make jr have like hero custom, or at least mask, that of taskmaster from the new movie of black widow, so he will not only have a mask but also sunglasses/lenses? Please tell me yes. It suits him that custom and, mostly, mask. Please update soon. I love this story
Guest chapter 3 . 1/31
I don't get it...
From what I've read, Junior seem to have won the duel fair and square but for some reason he has "Parole"? Like seriously, it doesn't make any sense unless you wanted to make Robin look like a sore loser and have Junior be watched despite Junior having won.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/16/2019
Thank you for the update. I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please make a happy ending. Make junior and raven get married and have children please.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/15/2019
neat
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