please update your stories it has been some time now, i am really curious about what will happen in your next chapters. please update your other story also. thanks

I don’t know if I already reviewed this so I will review again ensted of not reviewing this is a really great story and I would like you to continue it when you have time

Will admit, this was a great chapter and a great story overall so far :)
Also based on what we have learned so far, I think I already have a quite solid theory on how things will go in regards to judy's annoying little thorn...
Since we all got to realize this... As long as Foulfellow is with Donna... Judy will LOSE to any court case against them, due to Donna's wealth/power and Foulfellow's greed. Will definitely NEVER let judy see her daughter without "favors".
So this would mean in order to be able to succeed, they would need to be broken up in some way.
If Donna wasn't so blinded by "love", she would have dumped him easily. Then it hit me...
All the backstory we got on Nick and Judy have little parts in them, that prove useful to breaking them up or at least getting rid of foulfellow.
1. Foulfellow doesn't love the women, but what they can provide HIM. Mainly Money.
2. Any woman he is involved with, he ALWAYS chooses the one with the MOST money and power. Leaving the other in the dust.
3. He doesn't care about any Kids at all, unless they benefit him financially.
That is from Judy's past. Now think about this, if Judy and the Wildes knew of someone RICHER than Donna who not only would take their side, but also be perfect bait for the greedy tod. They could do away with him finally, since without donna he'd have no reason to take Nicole, and without him courts couldn't really give donna judy's kit.
That goes to Nick's backstory, he DOES know someone who fits that exact bill.
The princess of Macadamia, who not only would possess enough money to make Foulfellow WANT her, but also someone who would love to repay Nick for his heroic actions. Plus she lives far away, so she could take the prick far away.. Plus she wouldn't be blinded like donna was since she was already in a similar relationship herself.
All it would need is nick to trick Foulfellow into getting involved with her, and BAM. Then history would repeat itself, but this time Donna would be treated like judy was opening her eyes to his scummy ways. Then to really drive it home, nick asks the princess to take foulfellow back to her country where she would... Give him exactly what he deserves :D Yes I do mean either killing him, OR locking him up forever. Just to you know, prevent any possible future issues from him.

Excellent chapter and it looks like more mammals are becoming enshrined into the Wilde Household. I'm sure once Vivian learns about Judy's eviction that she will invite Judy to live with them. I'm sure inwardly Nick wouldn't mind lol. This is getting very interesting and I'm excited for the next part. And oh, I have this saran wrap and blow dryer and was wondering where that judge's car was? So if you could point me in the right direction, that would be appreciated. ;)

keep up the good work. i can't wait for the next chapter

great story, and it's just the first chapter

Boom stay strong Judy! Gosh I’m so happy you updated this

great chapter, please please dont let john take Nicole from judy. I hope everything works out for Judy. I am so glad you're back. i can hardly wait for the next chapters.

It's nice to see a new update of this story.
That being said, I had a bit of trouble ignoring the pacing and behaviors that did not seem propper in terms of what one would expect in a real scenario. What I mean by this is that a lot of things were happening at one moment, but suddenly we jumped to another scene with little exploration of the previous one. This created holes in the story that one would expect to be filled before moving on to the next subject.
Quite a lot of important things happened in just one chapter, enough to consider making two chapters with more depth instead of a more superficial one.

I love the story, but this particular chapter came out as rushed and not really convincing for me. Lots of dialog and limited descriptions of the characters' internal struggles and thoughts about what was happening. But that might be just me, mind you.

Thank you so much for the chapter! I knew Kate was Jack's daughter when she met Judy. Personality wise she's nothing like Jack. She said that he would kill him lol. I guess it made sense for Jack to be the overbearing father given his experiences. No joke though fathers who stop their daughters from dating is a real problem, I've seen what it does. Although I did laugh when Jack used his authority and pulled files, doing a background check on Alex. And then Nick joined too. Glad Jack had a change of heart, was hoping Jack was gonna say you better when he finished talking to Alex because I know he'll still watch him. Curious what Judy's plan is, looking forward to chapter 9.

Ahh it is great to see an update. This is a great twist on the story and one I hope to see more of. I mean the following as a complement, I really hate Judy's ex and girlfriend and the beginning of this story provided a bad taste in my mouth for the court system in the story too.

I get the feeling that Judy is soon going to have to learn she dosn't have to go it alone. Friends help friends, and obviously Nick's family (as seems oft to be the case) already know where this friendship is going.

I do look forward to more. Thanks for taking us along for the ride. Stay Safe!

Stay safe out there.

I really enjoyed this I can’t wait to see what happens next!

please up date your storys soon. I really, really would appreciate it if you do. I am dieing to know what happens next. thanks

Glad to see the story caught up to the version on Ao3. This is a lovely story and I'm happy to see Nick and Judy drawing closer together and working together like with Judy's kits. Some beautiful moments shared by them helping each other and wonderful writing. Great work!