| Reviews for Two Dozen Veela |
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Canuto-90 chapter 15 . 10/16 Another good chapter. I need Harry kicking Aiden's ass soon XD |
ThingsCanBeTwoThings chapter 15 . 10/16 Thanks for publishing. I enjoyed this rare, somewhat lighthearted chapter. |
Scarecrow94 chapter 1 . 9/30 Thanks |
omh666 chapter 14 . 9/16 Quite interesting. Looking forward to future updates. Thanks for such an out of the norm story. |
blackhack chapter 14 . 9/15 Really enjoying the antagonist Parvati and Aiden. An interesting take on Veela and harry / Gabrielle. |
Dumby95 chapter 14 . 9/13 Good chapter, even if i don't really buy into Victoire, she so look like a Mary Su. Like even newspaper gush about her etc. I don't know, 9 or 10yo child aren't really interesting when the story is about mature adults I guess. But still lovin'g A LOT the story ! good luck for your new job and school! Are you planning a new story after this? |
Dumby95 chapter 13 . 9/12 Awesome chapter, again. This need more reviews |
Dumby95 chapter 12 . 9/12 Your A/N3 was a life saving. i thought it was a percentile about all wizards, no matter the age. Looked weird to see victoire that High. |
Dumby95 chapter 11 . 9/12 what a chapter... |
Dumby95 chapter 10 . 9/12 Loved this chapter. But in the end "Do you have the team?" you probably meant "do you have the TIME" right ? |
Dumby95 chapter 9 . 9/12 i know she is young but what a dumb fucking move from tara -_- |
Dumby95 chapter 8 . 9/12 you know how to write battle |
Dumby95 chapter 7 . 9/11 good chapter, fucking Parvati, she is sending Vector vibes from path to power x) |
BBryant chapter 1 . 9/11 'Merican English is the cool English. I can't imagine how much it would suck to be british, lol |
Dumby95 chapter 6 . 9/11 poor Tara and daughter |